It Rains Red

[evilgeniuskoji]

Title: It Rains Red
Fandom: Dogs: Bullets&Carnage
Pairing: Heine/ Badou
Rating: PG-13
Summary: If he stands in the rain long enough, the blood will wash away. With sleep comes the nightmares and stained hands, so tonight he won't sleep.
Notes: First time I've written for Dogs, just got into the fandom. A fun pairing, I wonder how I did? It's been so

Comments

[phobiaplague]

I'm spoiled. I'm spoiled, and I'm glad you wrote this.

Let me just say that for your first attempt into the fandom, I really like this little short fix. You did a really good job with both of their characterizations, I think--Badou's especially. It's all too easy to picture this scenario.

And short though it was, you managed to capture a very simple, but very pretty sense of imagery that is just overall lovely.

I really do hope you keep up with this fandom with fics now and then--you did really well.

This is an immediate favorite.

Good job, bb.

[evilgeniuskoji]

Shiro kitty icon! 8D <3

You're not spoiled enough, bb. I'm glady ou thought so (Badou is such an expressive character, he's easy to write). I'll try! I might.

Good. <3 Thanks.

[phobiaplague]

Yes. <3 I use it mostly on you. :3 Have another.

I did. Ah, easy to write, maybe, but you wrote him well instead of just willy-nilly like so many authors in the fandom do.

Kaay. <3

You're welcome!

[ms_legerdemain]

Oh, this is wonderful! I love the way you've characterised both of them, and the imagery is beautiful. It's very believable, and the atmoshpere you've created is perfect.

Nice job. <3

[evilgeniuskoji]

Thank you! ^^ That's good to know!

Thanks for commenting.

[evilgeniuskoji]

Wow, I'm really glad you were able to enjoy it even if you didn't like the pairing! ^^ Thanks, I'll try!

[bi_bye]

ffffffs. |D i really like this. it's so cool to see you write for the dogs fandom and i hope you write more. especially the characterization for badou; goddamn.

and i love how you kept heine quiet and stoic, not saying much.

overall, nicely kept in character for a first time fic for the fandom, and very badou/heine-ish. on another note; i've always loved your descriptions in scenery. it's just nice and description and almost delicately in balance; i adore it.

/god, you may just make me active in the fandom

[evilgeniuskoji]

Haha, once I get into a fandom, I'm really enthusiastic about it.

That's cause Heine's an uptight asshole. <3

Thank you. :3

[coez]

So well-written. I love the form like you wrote the Badou and Haine's actions, the scene of candles (with delicade way), the bathroom. I'm glad that you wrote about this pair - in my opinion, Haine and Badou have a relation so intense that same time is cold and hot, and you get it. I wait that you make more in this fandom!

[evilgeniuskoji]

Thank you! I tend to do a lot of that. ^^

Yes, I agree! They're such a dynamic couple fan-wise, and they're so...well, not dramatic, but their actions are always extreme, so the hot and cold is totally chemistry on my end.

Thanks. ^^