Wow. Great meeting. Snape had just the right amount of snark and dark ambiguity -- absolutely perfect. And Harry had just the right amount of guilt. Definitely looking forward to more.
Thank you! I was really nervous about whether Snape was going to be right. And I didn't want to hang too much on the Dumbledore thing. I've read some fics where Harry and Snape duel it out for hours about the Dumbledore thing - and the third time that someone is writing the same old theories into ficion it starts to get old; and you know...Snape never wastes words. I figure he'd step on that one quite quickly. That's why this chapter's so small! I had trouble keeping Snape talking long enough! I had to go back and revise several times, and I think I might have ruined it by having him talking too much anyway. *hums thoughtfully* Still...I'm glad it worked, as I'm having Snape turning up again in a little while. *phew* Relieved!
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What's all this then?
I leave you for 24 hours and you give me two chapters?!?!?!
Right, then. Carry on!
ps Great work!
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