Twist

[evnobrn]

You can really feel it, out here at the
end.  On the tip.  At the peak.

Torsion.

Some bastard far up the line stepped

off-center

so we all just twist with it.

We all warp. We all sink to that level

just to be steady.

Don't grab the edges though: They'll cut you.

It keeps reiterating. Spiraling out.  Complicating into an end with blurred edges and run-on

Comments

[kreegahbundalo]

the last four sentences are definitely the strongest. and they blow my mind.
Keep it up, for god's (hah) sake.