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excesssummer

Starlight Express, Part 2/10

Jun 19, 2009 16:05

Chap 2

The creaking of the bunks in the tour bus was quiet, but Adam was having a really shitty time trying to get some sleep. It wasn’t so bad for him because he took the top bunk that Kris very generously acceded to (the media loved the speculation his comment on that generated) and he didn’t have to endlessly watch a swaying bed on top ( Read more... )

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mrsmaggiemae June 19 2009, 11:27:50 UTC

Awwww this was just too friggin cute at the end! Poor Kris, I hate being sick, I can't even imagine trying to perform in that condition. More soon please? :D

excesssummer June 20 2009, 22:58:55 UTC

I know, right? I hate being sick, too, but when I saw Kris in his interviews several days after his win, this practically wrote itself in my brain. He looked smashed, poor boy!

Thanks for the comment. And as for your previous comment ... watch the next part for "your" next guest appearance! :-)

Thanks, Julia the Kick Awesome PA!

jonoave June 19 2009, 12:08:09 UTC

This is awesome. I love friendship Kris - Adam and the rest. And Danny and Michael actually being decent people. Like how you flesh out Kris - gorgeously done and very relatable. The ending was full of gooey cuddliness, and makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. Poor Kris trying to sing NB, good ol' lil Kris trying his best and then.... awwwww.....

Please write more!

excesssummer June 20 2009, 23:05:12 UTC

Thanks ... I love making people agreeable in fics. I mean, I never loved Danny but I believe he's not as bad as some think! Friendship rocks!

savemoony June 19 2009, 14:35:47 UTC

Ahh... Fic in Character! *huggles it*

excesssummer June 20 2009, 23:05:40 UTC

Aw. *huggles back*

gypsy_ophelia June 19 2009, 18:24:05 UTC

This is really sweet- I love comfort fics. And this part especially I loved:

A small, quiet fight ensued between the nurse and Adam on who gets watch duty, but in the end Adam won. He took his place in the chair beside Kris’ bed, smirking.

As if.

excesssummer June 20 2009, 23:06:16 UTC

LOL one of my favorite parts to write! I could actually imagine Adam doing that, too!

Thanks!

deethy June 19 2009, 18:51:13 UTC

Awwww I really love this story so far! This chapter was great- sick Kris and a helpful Adam! And I dunno, but I love it when stories have Danny actually being nice LOL, not a big fan of conflict I guess! Anyways, great job can't wait to read the rest!

excesssummer June 20 2009, 23:07:46 UTC

I agree! As Kris said (shouted, actually), via "What's Going On?" -- War is not the answer!

Thanks so much for your generous comment!