Merlin: A Chuisle (4)

[exlibris_tenisu]

Woo, almost done! I had a really hard time figuring where to break this, and in the end the natural break was at the end of the third scene even though it was really long. So this chapter is longer than the rest: 6,404 words, which makes the last chapter shorter than I'd like, but that's just how it goes

Comments

[dark_subaru]

Arthur ^///^ Finally he is doing what his heart says! It's a start!

[ad_exia]

He's gotta start listening sometime~! ;D

[nyaza]

OHHHH ♥ MORE OWWWWWW ♥
I love how they are still the same but there's all the growing and chaning, and just them. Nice to see Arthur having brains & heart

[ad_exia]

Thank you~ Arthur seems to be learning, slowly but surely! And Merlin's starting to figure out a bit, as well. :D

[oximore]

THIS IS FANTASTIC!!!! :))))

(even if I would be a lot more bitter/angry if I was Merlin, but whatever!)

[ad_exia]

Thank you! :DD

(Aw, I guess Merlin's just not the type to hold a grudge, in the end. He's too nice. ^^;)

hmm

[baili_danseur]

So I usually totally am all for suspension of belief. But Merlin forgiving Arthur so easily is...ranks up there with completely implausible! lol. I like your writing, imaginative.

Re: hmm

[ad_exia]

It is a very big step... I guess the Merlin in my head is just the type who's willing to forgive anything, whether he ought to or not...

[sweetp000433]

Nope this chapter didn't work......still hate Arthur.