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exlibris_tenisu

PJO: The Age of Heroes | Chapter 10 - The Plan

Jul 07, 2009 01:37

Woo, next chapter! Now with ACTION! PG-13, as usual.

A/N: Smoots, for those interested~ ;D

( We came out of the hallway into a huge, marble-floored lobby with pillars and a dome high overhead. )

percy jackson & the olympians, the age of heroes

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ad_exia July 7 2009, 15:35:29 UTC

Thank you! :D

mizstorge September 18 2009, 00:49:03 UTC

I looked at my own sword, thinking that it looked almost like a dark mirror-copy of Percy’s sword. The stygian iron blade seemed to suck up all of the light and life around it. Everything it took from the living world, it channeled into me and made me stronger.
I like this - it's like the ultimate, mythic origin of the Black Sword in Michael Moorcock's 'Eternal Champion' series.

ad_exia September 18 2009, 04:45:59 UTC

Ooh, I'd actually never thought of it that way!

starlightstorm January 19 2010, 08:37:59 UTC

1. Older Nico would be hot. Of course Percy would like him that way.

2. I love that you're writing about someplace I've actually been; it makes it so much easier to picture! Not, er, that I've ever been to the bottom of the Charles, or even in it at all, but I do have memories of visiting you and thus the landscape of MIT and the bridge and all.

3. I kind of totally want to see an underwater fight scene in the movie(s) now. >>;

4. I love how Nico is king of the dead rats. Very clever, that. XD

ad_exia January 19 2010, 17:53:37 UTC

1) YES. YES HE WOULD~ ;D

2) XD I kept picturing the place they were in as the MIT basements, until I finally just said, "HEY, let's put them at MIT!" Then everything got much easier~ :D; It is always cool to read a story and go, "Hey, I've been there!"

3) XD Well, they might give you one. Or at least a scene with lots of water, from the looks of the preview? :D;

4) Well, they seemed to be something that would be prevalent that he could use...