DAY SEVEN πŸ’« #94 How We Love

Sep 18, 2016 08:43

Prompt number: 94
Title: How We Love
Pairing: Kyungsoo/Jongin
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 9,623
Summary: When their old roommates graduated, university couple Jongin and Kyungsoo decide to move in together. But life under one roof isn’t as easy as they thought it would be.
Author’s note: First of all, thank you to the mods for being extremely patient ( Read more... )

round 1: day 7, pairing: d.o/kai

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88x12 September 21 2016, 09:24:51 UTC
this!!! is!!! my!!! favourite!!!!! πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–
it's really heartwarming and their relationship was portrayed really well i just- damn πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–
everything here was perfect and the quote at the end fits the storyline like a glove teach me your ways sENPAI
thank you for your words πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–

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oxygenlove October 1 2016, 06:27:07 UTC
So many exclamation points!!!!! And πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’– Thank you so much!
I'm happy I was able to portray their relationship well :) Writing Kaisoo is always a pleasure.
I just thought the quote was perfect for them. I'm glad you thought so too!

Thank you for reading! ^^

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caterplina September 22 2016, 14:27:14 UTC
oh wow i really liked it!
it felt so realistic, their situations, their worried and the way the talked about it. i loved what kyungsoo said towards the end, asking jongin to get angry and him and not being so understanding. i felt their love all through the fic. i loved their conversation at the end, it was very natural.
i liked this fic a lot :)

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oxygenlove October 1 2016, 06:37:14 UTC
Yay I'm glad you liked it! I tried to portray the problems of being a busy university student as well as a couple growing up. I'm glad you found their conversations and actions realistic :) Being open with each other is a sign of long term commitment. When Kyungsoo asked Jongin that, I wanted it to show that he wants Jongin to be the one person who can always be honest with him, to keep him in line. If we're so afraid to be honest with someone, it means we still don't fully trust that person yet. I'm glad you felt their love throughout the fic because that's what I wanted to show :)

Thank you for reading ^^

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oxygenlove October 2 2016, 07:00:05 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad I was able to make their relationship appear realistic because that's what I was aiming for. It's easy to write Kaisoo so in love like this because lbh, this is exactly how they treat each other irl, with much care and love and understanding, but what's challenging is translating that much adoration in fic form, and making it feel genuine and not forced. I was worried I wouldn't do their beautiful relationship justice, so I'm glad I was able to show it here and get it across to you :) All the little details I included, that's really just them, and all I had to do was describe it into words.

Also yes they switch but it really depends on their moods ;)

Thank you for reading ^^

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anonymous December 26 2016, 13:47:18 UTC
Man, i love this soooooo much β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘
This is so realistic and lovely. Oh and how I need to stop reading in some parts to calm myself; inhale and exhale for at least five times to survive from all the fluff :)))

Thanks for writing this, author-nim β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘ absolutely gonna read this again someday ;)

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