DAY EIGHT 💫 #71 Days With You

Sep 19, 2016 11:00

Prompt number : 71
Title : Days With You
Pairing : D.O./Kai
Rating : PG13
Warning : None
Word count : 2.9k
Summary : Kyungsoo has to babysit two of the youngest Kims sometimes. Or is it?
Author note : Firstly, to the prompter, I deeply apologize because your prompt is a fun one but I didn't give it a justice. I was rushing it so it ends up so short ( Read more... )

round 1: day 8, pairing: d.o/kai

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jonginspuppy September 20 2016, 05:36:39 UTC
i was thinking hard what baekhyun meant by butter lol it turned out it was better
i fell in love with baekhyun character here??? please??
baekhyun thought jongin hyung was dying lol so cute
also bratty sehun :))
can we not talk about how bad jongin at flirting tho!!!! he should be thankful kyungsoo was already falling for him :D

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wolfpetals September 29 2016, 10:26:51 UTC
Hello!!
Omg hahah yes i tried making baekhyun's character here as adorable as possible ><
Also pls jongin's so lucky kyungsoo could stand his bad flirting hahah
Thank you so much for reading! ;____;

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dubudork September 20 2016, 07:13:43 UTC
This is really cute, I really liked the Kim siblings and especially grumpy lil Sehun! Thank you!

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wolfpetals September 29 2016, 10:28:05 UTC
AAAA glad u thought this is cute ;___;
Thank you so much for reading too!

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88x12 September 20 2016, 14:03:19 UTC
this was really cute. bratty!sehun is my favourite.
and i agree with kyungsoo; jongin is really a terrible flirt ;;
thank you for your words! <3

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wolfpetals September 29 2016, 10:29:55 UTC
Omg yes tbh i wanna continue jongin's terrible flirting but i ran out of time hahah
Thank you for reading! <3

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ddoublejjong September 20 2016, 16:21:48 UTC
Hello!! Firstly, thank you so so much for pick my prompt!! It really means a lot to me T_T And gosh please, you did a really great job!! I was smiling all the while while I was reading this!! This is really super adorable omg especially with kids!sebaek xDD Your characterisation for Sebaek were on point btw!! They're really cute especially when Baek went to Kyungsoo's house and said Jongin was dying HAHAHHAH I died so badly at his cuteness aigoo :')

And the ending was super cute too aigooooooo T_T I loved how Jongin tried so hard to win the game for Kyungsoo and tried even harder to flirt with him HAHAHHA but as terrible as he is, he still got Kyungsoo's (and our) heart ;))) heheh

Thank you for such a wonderful and adorable story author!! I enjoyed it so so much :') You did a really great job<3 COOKIES FOR YOU

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wolfpetals September 29 2016, 10:41:00 UTC
Hello!!
Omg so you're the prompter ;___; thank u for such an adorable prompt ;___;
Glad u liked it despite the mess it is hehe ><
!!!!! Also thank god u like Sebaek's characterizations here idk how to do it properly tbh

And actually this fic was supposed to be longer but i went through some problems and ended up messing with the deadline so this fic came out like this omg sorry ;__;

Thank you again for such an adorable prompt and glad that u enjoyed it! :D
/eats the cookies THANK YOUU

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kittensromance September 20 2016, 18:40:35 UTC
This was very cuuute~ I have to say, I feel in love with little Baekhyun!! (I need more of kid!baek in my life) When he said 'butter' and 'Jongin-hyung is dying' I was cooing at the cuteness! Jongin really was a terrible flirt -I was surprised bratty little Sehun didn't make any snarky comment on that, hehe I think the Kim brothers were very appropriately depicted here. And poor Kyungsoo, spending his days alone :(( At least he found good company, eventually hehe
Thank you for writing this!

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wolfpetals September 29 2016, 10:49:21 UTC
OMg who doesn't love lil cutie Baekhyun ;___; And yes Sehun was so done with Jongin's terrible flirting he decided not to say anything ahahahah. AAAaaa glad u thought the Kim brothers were appropriately depicted here, i thought it was a mess tbh.
And i can't bear letting Kyungsoo alone forever that's why the Kims came to the rescue! Lol
Thank you too for reading!!

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