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kai/tao anonymous March 21 2013, 02:35:14 UTC
[1/2] anonymous March 21 2013, 19:05:16 UTC
RATED NC17!
A/N: I know this is probably really poorly done, but I wanted to try and I apologize if it's not what you wanted. Hopefully someone else can fill this better. ^^

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Soft moans echo in Jongin's ears and he clamps hard on his bottom lip with his teeth in anticipation. He hears her panting, breath hitching before puffing out in small bursts and he can envision what she looks like already. Jongin had worked her up to the edge before being flipped onto his hands and knees and even if he can't see Zitao, he knows her cheeks are flushed and her hair is a tangled mess from where her head had been writhing in the pillow as he fit himself between her spread legs earlier. His mind flashes images of her on her knees behind him, slowly sliding the dildo inside herself before adjusting the straps for a better fit. She's lost a little weight lately so the straps were probably too loose and he's going to have to talk to her about working too much later, but right now all he wants is for her to hurryThe sheets rustle and Jongin lets ( ... )

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Re: [2/2] anonymous March 21 2013, 19:06:23 UTC
It doesn't stop him from doing it again and on the third time, she begins rocking with him until they build a steady pace. The glide of the dildo sends Jongin's body reeling, moans spilling from wet lips and sweat dripping down the sides of his face. Zitao speeds up, her moans mixing with his as she fucks herself and him at once. It's not about domination and submission. It's not about who has the power in their relationship. It's about the pleasure, plain and simple ( ... )

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Re: [2/2] anonymous March 21 2013, 19:38:32 UTC
op ANOOOOON i really didn't expect anyone to fill this (especially not so quickly) so i am so happy rn n__n this was incredibly hot, but also very sweet and you wrote them so romantic and trusting which was icing on top of an already delicious cake. thank you so much ♥

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Re: [2/2] anonymous March 22 2013, 02:45:30 UTC
I loved this. It was hot, they obviously understand each other on a deep level and care a lot about each other. The parts about Jongin's concern with Zitao working out too much and Zitao's nose (which would be a beautiful monster in any universe) really make this for me.

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Re: [2/2] anonymous March 22 2013, 20:19:28 UTC
unf anon i loved this line; she fucks herself and him at once. It's not about domination and submission. It's not about who has the power in their relationship. It's about the pleasure, plain and simple.

also the image of this; he carefully undoes the buckles and she hums lightly when he pulls it from her body. With it out of the way, he settles his weight on top of her, buries his face in her hair and breathes in her scent. Zitao turns her head and pokes Jongin in the cheek with her nose before he lifts enough for a languid kiss. ;; so sensual and... cutehot? is that a word? let's say it is. cutehot.

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