yesterday, i should’ve held you tighter

[exoternity]

Title: yesterday, i should’ve held you tighter
Pairing: Lu Han/Jongin
Rating: G
Genre: Angst, Friendship
Length: Drabble
Summary: Lu Han is a coward who likes to pretend everything is going to be alright.

“Hyung, I love you.”

“Mhhm. And I love you too.”

Jongin smiles and wills his heart to stop forming painful cracks.

Comments

[leilene]

UGH girly~ this is really, really, /really/ awesome. I just can't with you--

From the structure to the syntax, everything is perfectly in place. I love the mirroring affect: Starts with Kai desiring Luhan to Luhan yearning for Kai; Luhan pretending all the way through but what is truth and what is fiction switch places. Just absolutely beautiful.

Even the placement, spacing, and alignment of the paragraphs is wonderful. It really contributes to the mood and makes the ending all the more poignant.

Well done ;-; <3

P.s. love chocopies lol

Edit: cheeky baek lol

[exoternity]

i have the strong feeling that ... YOU'RE GOING TO BE MY FAVOURITE PERSON HERE IN LJ.

I mean.. come on.. kajsbdsakjfbkdjgbkejwfbewb YOU MAKE ME FEEL SO GOOD ABOUT MYSELF EVEN THOUGH... WELL, EVEN THOUGH I'M REALLY NOT~

this is written in a 5-minute span of time so IDK. THANK YOU FOR READING AND APPRECIATING THIS~

Secret OTP: KaiBaek //slapped

[leilene]

YOU REALLY ARE AWESOME THOUGH. Seriously. I hope you always have the inclination, the inspiration, and the desire to write fanfics-- stories-- anything. Whether you write in seriousness or in fun, you'll always have an avid supporter :)

The fact that you wrote it in 5-minutes is incredible. Some things do not need the approval of time to be beautiful!

YOU'VE BEEN CAUGHT RED-HANDED YOU-YOU-YOU KAIBAEK SHIPPER!!!!! >:3

*continuing from our last conversation on ships

I actually like shipping the boys with girls ahahahahaha idk I just think it's cute and I'm pretty realistic lol. I just don't like shipping within the SM family. That's incest AHAHAHA. So yeah, I'm not into f(exo) or SNSDxEXO.

It's not that I despise SuLay...I've just never seen any moments between them... o:

[exoternity]

WHY DID I JUST READ THIS NOW WHEN WAS THIS WHEN WAS THIS

hey are you alive? 😔

[adw1017]

WHAT DID YOU DO AIFOSJDLK MY HEART IT HURTS

[exoternity]

OMG ASK LUHAN. OTL.

[exoternity]

took forever to get back to my exo life.
I hope it's never too late to thank you! :)))