back to the states..

[explicit_cold]

sigh...scotland is so much better then here..not for the people i like here though..the scots arnt better then you, but they are just so much..nicer..well at least most of them, so i have made up my mind that hwen im 19. i am moving to edinburgh, getting situated there for a year, and then go to some university there.the arcitecture was beautiful

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[torn_rain_drops]

i like it. but i can't tell how good of a song it is because i can't here the music. shame. i wish i could.

i hope you're doing well.

[scribbledsonnet]

Hey, I actually REALLY like it, but one line kinda throws me off:

the "despise like dirt" line confuses me, because...eh, I don't know...I just can't see someone despising dirt.

Obviously, you don't have to take my word for it, but it's just my opinion. You could maybe sustitute another verb? Eh, I don't know. Nevermind. haha

I really like it, though--and I'm not just saying that. You are a really good writer, and your imagery is really good.

Take care, and I hope to talk to you soon.

< 33333333333.

[outsleepwalking]

excellente james st. james, I can't wait to here it in concert!
good Idea about moving to edinburgh, maybe I'll join you.
xo, Nora