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To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 29: Insecurities

Jul 06, 2021 22:35

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

lsjcandy July 7 2011, 09:19:02 UTC

*tuts* Jakey, you are overreacting a bit. Although Edward shouldn't've kissed her like that.. Did he know Bella had a boyfriend, or not?
And letting him end up at Lindsay's... why do I feel some jealous!Bella coming up?

And again, a standing ovation for Charlie Swan. He will not let his daughter make the same mistake he did.

exquisite_ugly July 8 2011, 15:51:50 UTC

Fear and worry make people do strange things. ;) As for Edward, I think he's more concerned with trying to get back. Deep down, he might have an idea, but he's still a little too far gone to register that.

And it's possible Bella could be jealous.. but there's that little fear she has as well in regards to imprinting.

And I love Charlie! He's the way a dad should be. Thanks. :)

willow2883 July 8 2011, 04:07:41 UTC

I don't know why people get so bent out of shape when Jacob and Bella and Edward act like real people. I could totally see Edward kissing Bella - and even though Bella knows she loves Jacob, I could see her being very confused about it. I could also see SIXTEEN year old Jacob, freaking out a little.
Although *giggles* I have to say I totally gasped when Edward kissed her - I DOUBLY gasped when I read Jacob SAW IT - and I practically SCREAMED when Jake saw Lindsay in the bar! LOL
Loved this chapter! All of it. Edward's fraction of a second memory - the Hitler-like vampire wanting a superior race - Edward kissing Bella - Jacob seeing it - Jacob seeing Lindsay - him going to stay at Lindsay's house - the almost kiss with her - all of it!
Don't apologize for a little angst. It makes things interesting! And real.
Is it just me or are people not reviewing much anymore on LJ? Is it because it's summer? Intoxicating is going strong on ffnet, but here on LJ it seems to have cooled off. :/

exquisite_ugly July 8 2011, 15:58:59 UTC

I don't know why people get so bent out of shape when Jacob and Bella and Edward act like real people. I could totally see Edward kissing Bella - and even though Bella knows she loves Jacob, I could see her being very confused about it. I could also see SIXTEEN year old Jacob, freaking out a little.

Pretty much everyone was okay with it! I thought it was all understandable reactions (not to mention Jake actually DID run away at the end of Eclipse so it's canon).

Although *giggles* I have to say I totally gasped when Edward kissed her - I DOUBLY gasped when I read Jacob SAW IT - and I practically SCREAMED when Jake saw Lindsay in the bar! LOL

LOL Well, that's what I was trying to aim for, so I'm glad it worked. ;)

Loved this chapter! All of it. Edward's fraction of a second memory - the Hitler-like vampire wanting a superior race - Edward kissing Bella - Jacob seeing it - Jacob seeing Lindsay - him going to stay at Lindsay's house - the almost kiss with her - all of it ( ... )