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To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 30: Airing it Out

Jul 16, 2021 22:48

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

audreyii_fic July 17 2011, 13:13:39 UTC

BLOW JOB! YAY! :)

Man, I love make-up sex. Love it.

exquisite_ugly July 18 2011, 15:59:29 UTC

haha I do remember you saying something about a lack of blow jobs! And yes, make-up sex.... it's kind of like, "Hey, let me go pick a fight!" ;)

willow2883 July 18 2011, 05:39:28 UTC

Dammit! A line in the first paragraph touched me and I scrolled down here to comment on it before I forgot and I saw Carrie's comment! DAMN! Now the element of surprise is gone. *stomps foot*
Anyway.
I wasn't sure which one of us would be the first thing on her mind.
Poor Jake. That sucks. I hope it's Jake.
Oh gosh! I forgot he was at Lindsay's house! *scrolls back up*
Bella,Bella, Bella! Tell him the kiss with Edward SUCKED! What's wrong with you?! I LOVE the whole jealousy thing. Bella thinking Jake imprinted on Lindsay, and poor Jake, who always gets the shaft, wondering what Bella felt when Edward kissed her... Okay. *scrolls back up*
Lip biting, hair yanking, fighting for dominance in kisses. HAWT!
Great chapter! Ends happily with the potential for action in the next chapter. I'm with Carrie - make-up sex rocks! LOL

exquisite_ugly July 18 2011, 16:05:13 UTC

Dammit! A line in the first paragraph touched me and I scrolled down here to comment on it before I forgot and I saw Carrie's comment! DAMN! Now the element of surprise is gone. *stomps foot*

Awww! That's not something I think of either, but yeah gotta be careful. I should remember that, too, because I'll start a comment occasionally before finishing!

Bella,Bella, Bella! Tell him the kiss with Edward SUCKED! What's wrong with you?! I LOVE the whole jealousy thing. Bella thinking Jake imprinted on Lindsay, and poor Jake, who always gets the shaft, wondering what Bella felt when Edward kissed her... Okay. *scrolls back up*

haha Well, we all know Jake's would be so much better... and Bella does, too! And jealousy is always a fun emotion to write. Those two are just so riddled with it at the moment!

Glad you liked the annoyed kiss ;) And yes, definite potential action ::reads up on kung-fu:: lol And as I told Carrie above, it's worth it just to start a fight. hehe Thanks hun!

lsjcandy August 6 2011, 11:55:58 UTC

As Audrey said, "YAY, BJ!" Funny how sex makes up a lot, given it can also completely ruin a relationship.
I know that Lindsay was just being nice, but I wanted Bella to push her out of the way for the dramatic effect.
HUMANS! Yay, I missed Bella's friends, really did.
I'm sorry for the delayed comment, I was abroad.