To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 31: I Will Protect You

Jul 30, 2021 19:31

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU ( Read more... )

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willow2883 August 1 2011, 18:50:17 UTC
Okay, I was reading along, so sad for Bella saying goodbye to the Cullens. Even feeling sorry for Edward, still not knowing who he is.
Then I read this:
We'll just spend some time together and then I'll make love to you until you pass out."
And everything else just faded away. LOL Can't quite get past that...
I LOVE Bella/Jake and alcohol! And drinking games? Woo-hoo! *scrolls back up*
Truth or Dare - my personal favorite.
Jake! Jake! Jake! GREAT question! But I'm giggling at work & that makes me look weird!
*scrolls back up*
Hot, hot, hot! Great lemon! And the getting caught? hehe
Her nightmare gave me chills.
Are we going to see a battle?
Great chapter sweetie!
P.S. Where is everyone on LJ??

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exquisite_ugly August 2 2011, 16:06:13 UTC
Okay, I was reading along, so sad for Bella saying goodbye to the Cullens. Even feeling sorry for Edward, still not knowing who he is.
Then I read this:
We'll just spend some time together and then I'll make love to you until you pass out."
And everything else just faded away. LOL Can't quite get past that...

LOL Yeah, J/B sex (and just the thought of it) trumps everything else. ;) Glad I'm eliciting some sympathy for Edward, though, since I am aiming toward that!

I LOVE Bella/Jake and alcohol! And drinking games? Woo-hoo! *scrolls back up*
Truth or Dare - my personal favorite.
Jake! Jake! Jake! GREAT question! But I'm giggling at work & that makes me look weird!
*scrolls back up*

Truth or Dare is a classic! And trust Jake to turn it to that. ;) And hey your giggling at work is good for me! Mission accomplished. haha

Yes, there will be a battle scene (*cringing over writing that, but sorta fun too*). Dun dun dun. Thanks for the review, bb.. glad you liked it (and the lemon ;P)

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lsjcandy August 6 2011, 12:18:10 UTC
P.S. Where is everyone on LJ??
I read somewhere on Tumblr a rather large amount of people got a virus via LJ ;c

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lsjcandy August 6 2011, 12:17:22 UTC
LET'S COMMENT. There're some updates to catch up with :')

I wanted to be with Jake, holding on to him for support. I also didn't want him to see me like this.
Ah, the famous 'To show insecurities or to not show'.
*scrolls up again*
I'm sorry, ever since Dan brought up the face-touching aspect of Edward's and Bella's relationship, "I touched his cheek" sounds horrible to me, so annoyingly old-fashioned. But maybe it's me.
Hey, even I was sad when the Cullens left. I like Rosalie, despite how much of a bitch she can be.
Huh, weird dream.
Desiree, that sounds like an unusual name in America. I've only ever heard the Dutch pronounciation of it, which sounds, well, very Dutch.
Ohhh, drunk!Bella, I almost forgot the disaster that was in this fic :')
LOLOL, THOSE WOMEN. This demands an outtake.
Nice, Hells-Bells, you're cursing. I'd like to see her using the goddamn flare gun ;)

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exquisite_ugly August 7 2011, 02:43:41 UTC
What's with LJ not giving me email alerts anymore?? *cranky face*

I'm sorry, ever since Dan brought up the face-touching aspect of Edward's and Bella's relationship, "I touched his cheek" sounds horrible to me, so annoyingly old-fashioned. But maybe it's me.

haha I forgot about that! That was always quite amusing. It is very annoyingly old-fashioned, but I suppose that's appropriate for Edward.

And yeah, there were times I understood some of Rose's bitchiness. I didn't despise her. I sort of found her annoying in Breaking Fail, though.

Desiree isn't typically a name I hear very often. I just pulled it out of nowhere. haha

And yes, I'm now debating an outtake. ;) Oh, and a flare-gun is, um, quite possible. :X Thanks, hun!

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lsjcandy August 7 2011, 11:00:16 UTC
LJ does give me alerts...?
Yeah, for Edward, that's why it stood out for me xd
THAT. I loved Rosalie throughout the saga, but in Breaking Failure she just irked me with her baby obsession.

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