To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 32: Preparations

Aug 11, 2021 22:22

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU ( Read more... )

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willow2883 August 17 2011, 03:21:12 UTC
That was a great idea pulling the Denali coven into the fight. Don't see how the Volturi could win, what with the Cullens, the Denali's AND the wolves.
When you mentioned Old Quil, my first thought was, 'but he's dead!' LOL
Made me giggle that the pack are attracted to Kate and Tanya. Were they really irresistable? I can't remember...
I loved the moment between Jake and Billy. That was really poignant. You've done a great job building up the suspense - I'm ready for the fight!

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exquisite_ugly August 17 2011, 16:00:43 UTC
Thanks hun. I figured they would need some sort of back-up!

When you mentioned Old Quil, my first thought was, 'but he's dead!' LOL

lol I've done that already.. especially if I read something right after something else. haha As for Kate and Tanya (and technically Irina), I saw online that they were referred to as that.. that's how they draw the men in. Sex 'em up, then kill 'em, but they got lonely and decided to go the vegetarian route. I *think* something of the sort was mentioned in the partial draft of Midnight Sun.

And yes, ready for the fight.. it's a bitch to write, but also kind of fun! Thanks for the review :)

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lsjcandy December 30 2011, 12:34:58 UTC
AND HERE'S ME CATCHING UP ON EVERYTHING.
I stopped reading this since this chapter... don't even know why, but I'm back again and leaving reviews!
Brb reading.

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