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To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 37: Epilogue

Oct 09, 2021 22:13

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

willow2883 October 12 2011, 18:18:08 UTC

I knew you couldn't resist babies! LOL
Twilight meets True Blood. I like it. SMeyer did have to screw things all up when she tried to create sparkly, venomy vampires. I miss fangs. :(
Very sweet ending. Jacob and Bella truly went through a lot together and the span here is what? 12 years? Wow.
Edward with Tanya. That's who he should have been with. My first thought was 'Yay! Edward's getting laid! It's about time!' I mean, really. Celibate for over 100 years. RME
Looking forward to future stories, bb! I know the relief tinged with sadness that comes at the end of a long fic. 20 chapters wore me out! You're amazing!

exquisite_ugly October 13 2011, 18:56:35 UTC

You know I can't resist J/B!babies. ;)

Twilight meets True Blood. I like it. SMeyer did have to screw things all up when she tried to create sparkly, venomy vampires. I miss fangs. :(

I never thought it was clever that she decided to make all these changes. Sparkling? Really? The touch of teeth and the venom is so freakin' annoying.. it makes it hard to write around that, so hence True Blood (who does vamps right!)

Very sweet ending. Jacob and Bella truly went through a lot together and the span here is what? 12 years? Wow.
Edward with Tanya. That's who he should have been with. My first thought was 'Yay! Edward's getting laid! It's about time!' I mean, really. Celibate for over 100 years. RME

Yeah, it was about 10 years later! And yes, I agree.. Edward not getting laid in all those years was pure ridiculousness. He's such a dippy vampire. Tanya the succubus will cure him of that. ;)

Looking forward to future stories, bb! I know the relief tinged with sadness that comes at the end of a long fic. 20 chapters wore me out! You're ( ... )

willow2883 October 17 2011, 04:44:59 UTC

Do you have plans on starting another as well, or no?
I randomly opened Eclipse (my favorite of the books) a few weeks ago, and was re-reading the section of the book where Jacob jogs Bella 10 miles up the mountains to the campground (with the tent) and Eddie waiting. For some reason, I picked up in the middle of J/B's conversation and started writing, with just the intention of rerouting their conversation and playing with it. I started writing, and eventually ended up with them in the sleeping bag together, and Alice calling Edward, who is forced to leave. So I've got them alone, in the sleeping bag, and yet I don't want to do another wham-bam in the sleeping bag fic. So I left it hanging and not sure where I want to go with it. I was taking a walk 2 weeks ago, and an idea popped into my head and luckily I had my droid and jotted it down on my phone, because I have no recollection of what that idea was! LOL
So to answer your question in an extremely roundabout way - maybe! I have that started, and also started a Halloween fic for ( ... )

schulmanavy October 31 2011, 15:33:28 UTC

Pretty nice post. I just stumbled upon your blog and wanted to say that I have really enjoyed browsing your blog posts. In any case Iâll be subscribing to your feed and I hope you write again soon!

exquisite_ugly October 31 2011, 18:57:21 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. :) I'll be posting more fics on my journal as I get them done! Thanks for reading. :)