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Picking up the Pieces, 6: The Confrontation

Mar 16, 2022 22:47

Title: Picking up the Pieces

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, future explicit sex)

Summary: Bella returns to Forks a few years after having married Edward and moving to Alaska. Mistakes and regrets, loneliness and grief, she severs ties and returns to those she truly loves to start over. What will she come home to? AU, A/D/R, M- ( Read more... )

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Comments 17

lsjcandy March 17 2012, 09:29:21 UTC

I stayed far away from the driftwood log that Bella had said was our log.
Aw, everywhere he goes there are memories of Bella. No wonder he moved away.

I laughed as she insisted on dipping her toes into the water and then screeched about how cold it was.
I like Lila. She's a short-haired blonde who likes photography, Jacob Black and doing stupid things. *thumbs up*

"Wow. So, you left because you were devastated about Bella, but here you are with a new girl,"
*snorts* As much as I like Jacob and respect him and think he needs some space for moving on, yeah, pretty much, Quil. If you put it like that, it sounds like a dick move.

Bella's pale, heart-shaped face was a mix of surprise and hurt; nothing was held back.
Funny, NM was all about Bella lying to herself (and, you know, everybody else) about her feelings, now she's letting it go at the worst period possible.

"I'm trying. Will you try, too?"
*sniffles* Oh, such a broken family.

"Bells, just remember I'll take him down if he hurts you. I got your back."I love how they've become ( ... )

willow2883 March 18 2012, 04:56:40 UTC

ARE WE GETTING DRUNK BELLA? THAT'S LIKE THE BEST BELLA.
Hey! You always give me a hard time when my stories have Bella drinking! :P

lsjcandy March 18 2012, 13:11:17 UTC

You always give me a hard time when my stories have Bella drinking! :P
Did I scar you for life by giving you that review? :')

willow2883 March 18 2012, 18:20:50 UTC

Which review? The one where you told me to burn in fanfic hell? LOL Hell no! That's one of my favorite reviews!
I've written about 50 some-odd (give or take), fics and drabbles, and three of them have a little drinking in them, but I always get a little lecture/comment about the alcohol. :(
No fair!

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willow2883 March 18 2012, 04:54:16 UTC

Charlie's POV would be cool, but I think I'd rather have Lila's POV. Curious to see just what Jake has told her about Bella, and also curious to see just how deep she's in with Jake. I mean, who could not fall for Jacob?
The scene on the beach with Jake and the pack, Lila and Bella - can you say awkward?

exquisite_ugly March 20 2012, 18:48:49 UTC

Sweet! The majority seems to be for Charlie's POV, but I can tell you now.. Lila's POV soon wouldn't be out of the question! I agree, some insight on her part could be interesting. And yes, who wouldn't fall for him??

Yeah, awkward situation for sure. Though the pack suspected and went back to work, so that's a *tiny* bit better. haha. Thanks for the R&R, bb!

jeri_1116 May 11 2012, 01:52:03 UTC

It's not really Lila's bizz, but because she cares for Jake, I guess I could understand. Also why should Jake worry if he's hurting Bella? He's been through enough with her, let her stew.

Whoa Charlie went off the rails. But still he just lost his only daughter, they could've tried again with him.

Still liking Leah also. Maybe being friends with Bella is a good thing.

Great chapter.

exquisite_ugly May 15 2012, 03:33:31 UTC

Thanks! It definitely wasn't Lila's business, but concern makes us do crazy things sometimes! As far as Billy and Sue, they could have.. but knowing the frame of mind he was in, Billy having "lost" Jacob in a way, too.. and them being men probably didn't make it easier.

And yay for Leah! ;)