Picking up the Pieces, 12: Temptations

[exquisite_ugly]

Title: Picking up the Pieces

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, future explicit sex)

Summary: Bella returns to Forks a few years after having married Edward and moving to Alaska. Mistakes and regrets, loneliness and grief, she severs ties and returns to those she truly loves to start over. What will she come home to? AU, A/D/R, M-

Comments

[willow2883]

This is my favorite chapter so far! I read it the other day and was pressed for time, so I'm back now to leave a review. Sorry it took me so long!
This was perfect. Sexy, sweet and hot.
But, you pulled a cock-block tease on us again! How could you end it like that??? Gah!
I loved the sweet embarrassing conversation between Billy and Jake. Not a lot said, but enough to make it an embarrassing parent/child sex talk. hehe
Guess those fake pirates were enough to inspire some sweet hotness out of you after all. :P

[exquisite_ugly]

Thanks hun! I know, what can I say? I'm a tease. ;) I love Jake/Billy moments, so had to have that in there. heh I like how Jake sort of gave it back to him even though they were both embarrassed. Seems like a Jake thing to do! haha

And yeah, those fake pirates were HOT. ;P

[tunde_tre]

See? I knew I should wait reading this chapter until chap13 is posted too! Now I can read on and enjoooooy Jacob!
"I sighed, torn between annoyance, mortification, and laughter." - the perfect description of that situation! I love Billy, please don't kill him!
Love, Tunde

[exquisite_ugly]

haha Then you don't have to wait for the big moment. ;) And Billy's just having a rough time.. being confined to a wheelchair and diabetes; he needs his son. :)

Thanks hun.. glad you liked it!