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To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 15: Hold Me Close

Feb 10, 2021 22:43

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

lsjcandy February 11 2011, 10:35:38 UTC

Sorry Bella, that's the real world. Guys who try to get in your panties the obvious way. At least she's doing something about it, points for Bella!

Likes for Lindsay. *thumbs up*

The guilt Dana feels, although not completely necessary given the fact that she's not Alice, is understandable :(

Brandon, what's gonna happen when you meet Jake? I hope not something too bad ;)

exquisite_ugly February 13 2011, 03:39:41 UTC

Thanks for reviewing, bb.. and I agree. I think it's time for Bella to try being strong. I think it's pretty canon-ish, considering she punched Jake for kissing her, so it made sense for her to react. And really.. who wouldn't? :\

And Dana is becoming a pretty good friend.. haven't had Bella say too much but it's becoming a good frienship. There will be more with Dana coming up soon!

haha - And Jake meeting Brandon might be scary.. for Brandon. ;)

lsjcandy February 13 2011, 10:03:08 UTC

Your fic is one of those which I always review, no matter what, just so you're motivated enough to continue it :D
Well, yeah, I would've punched that asshole too.. the only difference is, Bella was too stupid to admit that she was in love with him. Had I been in her shoes, I would've been Jake's girlfriend already :)

And my wish has come true, Bella interacting more with humans!

Why am I not surprised?

exquisite_ugly February 13 2011, 23:42:18 UTC

lol Gotcha. I have no plans to stop, but I appreciate the motivational reviews. ;)

I think most of us would be Jake's girlfriend already. :)

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exquisite_ugly February 13 2011, 03:42:23 UTC

I concur. :) I think it's time for Bella to want to try and improve certain things.. she's getting there! And thanks for the review! :) Oh, and by the way, cat avis = WIN!

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exquisite_ugly February 13 2011, 23:47:05 UTC

There are a couple things holding her back, but getting closer again is going to start breaking some walls down. :)

And I figured it was time for Bella to want to try and be strong.. she may be a bit stupid, but she's not too far gone. ;) Thanks for the review.. glad you're still enjoying it! :)