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To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 16: Expect the Unexpected

Feb 20, 2021 22:35

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU ( Read more... )

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Comments 7

lsjcandy February 21 2011, 09:57:49 UTC

Oh, I see what you're doing, you're killing me, right? Tsk.

Jake dating Lindsay.. Poor Bella when she saw him buckling his belt. Must hurt ;c

Also, it was for the better good that Brandon left, because he would end up getting hurt.

AND HOW DARE YOU. Billy a stroke? :'(

exquisite_ugly February 22 2011, 16:50:16 UTC

I know, I was a bit evil with this chapter! But yes the belt-buckling was a bit harsh, but the thing is.. it's not known yet just what happened. Will pop up in the next chapter. :)

And I agree about Brandon.. he's a nice guy, he cared about her and vice versa, but she knows she'll hurt him more in the long run and so does he. Thanks for the review!

audreyii_fic February 21 2011, 17:35:11 UTC

Aw. Belt-buckling. I'm guessing there's more story there than we know about, but still. Nothing makes me heartfail like the thought of Jacob having casual sex (unless it's grudgefucking, that just kills me).

exquisite_ugly February 22 2011, 16:51:28 UTC

I know, it was hard to write, too.. but you would be guessing pretty correctly. It'll come up in the next chapter. :) Thanks for the review!

willow2883 February 23 2011, 07:30:09 UTC

Okay, you're not only breaking Bella's heart, you're breaking mine!! Jake buckling his belt? Seriously, punch to the gut there.
But if you're going to go there, I would like some details or an explanation. I kind of got stuck at the belt buckling line and haven't even tried to wrap my head around the Billy/stroke stuff.
Also? Seriously wanna slap Bella. If Lindsay and my Jake were going into the bedroom together - there would be some bitch-slapping going on. Bella needs to stand up and tell Jake she wants him and doesn't want to lose him to someone else. Or I just can't feel sorry for her. The helpless boo-hoo act is not working. And the fact that he is crawling into bed with her at night is not fair to Lindsay. And if Bella is going to turn her back on him every night or cry, what's the point? Jake might as well go sleep in the other bedroom.
You know I love your stories Meggie, I'm just venting. Your Bella seriously makes my hand itch cos I wanna smack her! LOL

exquisite_ugly February 24 2011, 16:53:28 UTC

Sowwy :( That will be covered a little bit in the next chapter as I move into Jake's POV for a little while. And Bella is getting stronger.. she's not ready yet, but things are happening as all I'll say! I know, they're both making mistakes, but my excuse is they're both young and don't have much experience with relationships. Just bear with me. hehe

Thanks for the review, bb. :)

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exquisite_ugly February 24 2011, 16:56:14 UTC

Yep! He told her his real age, that he has fake documents so he could work full-time. Definitely didn't tell the wolf secret.. and no, he hasn't been phasing, but he thinks of it on occasion! As far as the bedroom thing, that will be covered a little bit in the next chapter.

And they left shortly after graduation, and at this point in the story it's around the beginning of March, so they haven't been there quite a year yet.

And thanks for the review! :)