To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 18: Making a Decision

[exquisite_ugly]

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU

Comments

[willow2883]

*choruses sing and angels weep*
Dear god, finally!! Hallelujah!
I loved Quembry.
“Dude, we miss your hairy ass,” Quil said making me smile slightly.
“I’m sure you do, since that was the only thing you ever saw when trying to beat me in a race,” I replied causing Embry to howl with laughter and Quil to sputter indignantly. LOL
I felt so bad for Lindsay, I almost wanted Jake to give her a goodbye boink. :P
I thought at first that Jake was gonna be all sullen through the whole chapter and you would make us wait again. But I'm so glad you didn't.
*does happy dance and says in singsong voice* Jake's gonna get some! Jake's gonna get some!
Great chapter.

[willow2883]

P.S. Love the song choice too. That's one of my favorites.

[exquisite_ugly]

lol Glad I could make you happy. ;)

And I do so love Quembry! They're fun.

As far as Lindsay.. I was kind of sad writing that. haha. But then again.. that *might* not be the end of Lindsay.. *cough* hehe

Thanks hun.. glad you enjoyed! (as Jake will too ;P)

[lsjcandy]

Hell to the yes :) No one complains about the fading to black, it was pretty well done.

Aww, Lindsay, that's really your loss, but so good of you! *pats*
And thanks for the Quembry in this chapter, I sure do miss them :p
Does this mean, by the way, they're gonna make it official? As in, official official?

[exquisite_ugly]

thanks hun! and we do have the next chapter.. this one just happened to end before any real details came up. ;)

As for being official... well, they're jumping the gun a *bit*, but it's moving that way isn't it? hehe.

[audreyii_fic]

You blacked out. Grr. I'll forgive you since the chainlink fence thing was awesome.

[exquisite_ugly]

muhaha The next chapter might make up for it. ;) And thanks.. I find chainlink fences kind of sexy. haha

[exquisite_ugly]

Thanks! :) And I don't think Jake would be a jerk like that.. so yeah respecting her was a good idea.

And what will be next... hmm... hehe

[exquisite_ugly]

lol Simple and to the point. ;)