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To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 20: A Weekend Getaway

Apr 03, 2021 00:58

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU ( Read more... )

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exquisite_ugly April 5 2011, 15:45:32 UTC

Thanks :) It was nice to write some fluff!

lsjcandy April 3 2011, 11:03:25 UTC

Fluffy chapters are fluffy :3
Throw in some sex, Rachel, Billy, Dana AND Charlie, voilà, c'est perfection.
Although I did miss some dialogue, it was a lot of indirect stuff...

exquisite_ugly April 5 2011, 15:48:22 UTC

Thanks :) I like writing with other characters.. it's fun to break away a little bit from J/B.

And you know, I kind of went back and forth on the dialogue.. but it sort of felt like bogging the chapter down here and there when there was a lot of stuff going on, so I just did it in spurts when it wasn't overly important.

lsjcandy April 5 2011, 15:50:44 UTC

I like combining other characters with J/B :3

Ah, okay...

audreyii_fic April 3 2011, 12:50:24 UTC

Awwww...

exquisite_ugly April 5 2011, 15:48:45 UTC

Is it weird to go "awww" myself when I wrote it? *ponders*