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To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing, 28: Set in Motion

Jun 25, 2021 16:14

Title: To Mend a Butterfly's Broken Wing

Author: exquisite_ugly

Rating/Warnings: M (language, sexual situations)

Summary: After the newborn fight things take a different turn with the Volturi. Edward goes missing, the Cullen's leave to search for him, and Bella flees town from the pain of loss. Can Jacob help her deal with the grief a second time? AU ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

willow2883 June 26 2011, 04:51:14 UTC

Hmmm. I wonder why it seems Aro is going against the rest of the Volturi and giving Bella and Alice warnings? And how is Bella going to be able to help save them?
I liked the flash of recognition that Edward had with Jacob. I always love when Jake goads him, for some strange reason.
At least the pack are all well and not effected by anything going on.
I'm still wondering what the heck they did to Edward?

exquisite_ugly June 27 2011, 18:59:33 UTC

Well, Alice is definitely getting the warnings... for the most part, with Bella, we know from the books that she's always had dreams that are eerily close to visions. It's kind of a gray area with her.

And yes, Jake goading Edward is always a good thing. He's also less removed from the situation and can make decisions that might not seem the best to those who love Edward! Edward is the burning question... I can't pinpoint when yet, but I don't expect it to be TOO much longer! Thanks for the review. :)

audreyii_fic June 26 2011, 20:28:03 UTC

Thank you for having Quil date. Just... thank you.

Jacob triggering Edward was iiiiiiinteresting. Sometimes getting your drama on is the most effective way of bringing shit to the surface...

exquisite_ugly June 27 2011, 19:01:20 UTC

haha We're in the same boat, I think, in regards to Quil. He should not be forced to have to wait to "date" someone he plays little-girl games with! But you're welcome anyway ;)

And so true.. and like I told Wills, Jake is less affected by Edward's plight and can see a little clearer about what Edward actually needs vs. what his family thinks he needs. Thanks for the review. :)

lsjcandy June 29 2011, 14:48:47 UTC

"Oh? Then why aren't we fighting?"

Lolol, love the childish behaviour here.
You have provoked the Jakeward part within me with this chapter. Honestly, the ship has something fascinating...
It's kinda creepy, but also very... villain-y of the Volturi to be so dead-set on getting Edward and Alice (and probably the rest of the Cullens).
And I loved the little bit of normalcy that was thrown in with Dana's call.

exquisite_ugly June 30 2011, 15:56:24 UTC

I enjoy childish behavior at times (even for myself and I'm probably too old for that) ;) And glad you enjoyed the Jakeward.. I admit there's something interesting to the idea (though no slash.. a little creepy for me!) haha.

I like a creepy Volturi better than a "let's talk and walk away" Volturi! And yeah, I missed Dana. She's a lighter part in the story for me to write! Thanks for the review :)