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exscienciatri

FIC: Painted Skies and Trampolines

Jun 04, 2006 11:16

Title: Painted Skies and Trampolines
Fandom: X-Men
Rating: PG
Summary: 50 sentences, 50 moments in Scott and Logan's relationship. Ranging from walks to birthdays to trampolines. Written for the

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fanfiction, x-men

Comments 25

kirke_novak June 4 2006, 18:49:16 UTC

Amzing. Each of those sentences was a story of it's own and yet, they made a whole. And my fav? #35 because yes, Logan and trampoline *snorts*

exscienciatri June 6 2006, 04:51:55 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting! :-)

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exscienciatri June 6 2006, 04:52:16 UTC

Thank you for commenting!

koshi700 June 4 2006, 19:57:51 UTC

This was great, I was afraid that it wouldn't make sense, but this was great! Each sentence was a moment, yet the whole thing together also told a story that you could follow. Great job.

exscienciatri June 6 2006, 04:53:56 UTC

Thank you! I was also worried none of it would make sense, but I'm glad it worked out okay. :-)

scogan June 4 2006, 20:28:28 UTC

“Do you want me to stop?” Logan asks, concerned, and Scott hesitates before stammering, “Yes,” then, “no.”

*melts*

exscienciatri June 6 2006, 04:52:32 UTC

Hehe thank you.

supercaptain182 June 4 2006, 20:40:26 UTC

Truly wonderful.

exscienciatri June 6 2006, 04:52:46 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting!