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[atthevenue]

0900 hours
Heroes | Ensemble (point of views)
PG13 | 1151 words

Comments

[atthevenue]

I wrote you a letter...

you can't have read it already?? :O

[atthevenue]

Awww...thankyou... :3

*gasp* it's so much better now... and yes, it's directly related to plots from the last episode and possible future episodes. You need to catch up. XD

[atthevenue]

Oh, well that's a legitimate excuse but in all honesty, I'm surprised you weren't having anxiety issues prior due to all the hottness on that show. XD

It's definitely gotten good especially the last few eps

[levitatethis]

I really like this story. You've brought the reader into it in the middle and you've done a nice job of filling in only some of the details. What we don't know is what keeps the tension at a high level...something I really enjoy because I have no idea where you're going with it.

Keeping this in Sylar's POV also works to not only bolster his own arrogance, condescenion, unspoken regret, but the uncertainty of what is unfolding around him. He sees how people see him but he can't say for sure what is going through their minds. There are scraps of volatile emotion here and there and a very powerful disconnect that keeps him on one side, away from everyone else, while still having him be right in the middle of it all.

I love the way you've rendered this particular world. It's stark and scary, everything and everyone is on edge yet there's as much a threat from within as there is from outside.

Great job!

[atthevenue]

Not going to lie, but your comment intimidates me a bit... but I love it. :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed it and you understood the subtleties of the overall picture. You're very good at virtually dissecting the information given to you and in turn understanding it with such emotion.

Thanks again. :)

[levitatethis]

My intention is never to intimidate...I just get a bit wordy sometimes when trying to explain why I like something so much :-)

[atthevenue]

Oh god, don't worry about it. :) It's completely understandable and I enjoyed reading your interpretation.

[mabetini]

Oooo this is very cool...I love your writing style!

[atthevenue]

Thanks. I actually tried a new writing style in this one and I actually like it a lot so I'll probably continue using it. It makes the story seem mysterious. :)