[FIC] SPN: Yellow Butterfly (NC-17, Het)

[extraonions]

Art Prompt Title: Cornerstone (Brady/Jess)
Art link: Art Masterlist
Artist: melanth0

Fic Title: Yellow Butterfly
Author: extraonions
Fandom/Genre: SPN, Horror, Angst
Pairing(s): Sam/Jess, Brady/Jess (Non-Con)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~5,400
Warnings: Ongoing RAPE and abuse alongside elements of dubious consent (in the vein of Stockholm Syndrome). Gore and

Comments

[jessie990800]

could you write more on this about when any of the winchesters (john, dean, sam) are sent to hell if they find her.

[extraonions]

Thank you for commenting! The ending of the story takes place basically right before the end of 5x22 when Sam has gone to hell and Castiel has his angel powers back (and Dean is with Lisa)... so it's definitely possible for Jess to find Sam or vice versa. John and Dean wouldn't be in hell during the time frame she is though. I kind of want to see where S6 takes us as far how Sam got out of hell and what happened to him there (I tried to dovetail this into the set up of S6, when we didn't know if or how Sam would get out of hell). But I will definitely keep it in mind and if I can find a way to work something out that doesn't totally contradict the canon I might try to write more about it so we can see Jess again.

Thank you again! :)

[gestaltrose]

Dark and twisted and perfect. I love Jess.

[extraonions]

Thank you very much for commenting and I'm so happy Jess worked for you! :)

[smash86]

Deliciously dark...wonderfully written...the despairing image of Jess is so strong and vivid but you've also managed to retain her fierce love for Sam...I love how in the end she chooses Sam and hell...it's like after all the sufffering Jessica has still held onto a piece of herself and she chooses to jump into the fire to stay true to herself and her love.

*smirks*...then again if was going to hell for anyone I would choose Sammy too...mmm yum!!

Don't stress about the content sweetie...you put the warnings up and we're all grown up enough to decide what to read...then I AM a sucker for a dark angsty fic!!

*hugz*...well done!!

[extraonions]

Thank you so much for commenting and the kind words! I'm really happy the story and Jess' characterization/motivations worked for you. I most hoped to be able to portray her as someone strong even when she was helpless, and someone with a personality that wasn't too easily destroyed by adversity.

Thank you again. :)!

[sailorhathor]

This had some really great moments. Excellent descriptions, and I loved Castiel coming for her. Felt sorry for Jess quite a bit of it too - I'm hoping she and Sam can somehow be reunited and he saves her from her torment.

One little thing, though - the character's name is Brady, not Brad. ^_^;;

[extraonions]

*facethunks forever* Thank you so much! I ended up writing this without re-watching the associated episode and now I really feel silly! I'll be correcting that right now.

I really appreciate the comments and I'm happy the descriptions worked for you!

[melanth0]

oh my god. I can't believe it took me so long to get around to this, but you have done the most AMAZING job. There's just so much here, and it fills things in and opens up new questions and I love it. I love the texture of Jess's ghost-world, and the painting (I think the painting might be my favorite part), and the end, and the beginning, and just. thank you so, so much. ♥

[extraonions]

Thank you! ♥ I'm so happy you liked it! The painting is one of my favorite parts too so I'm really glad it worked for you. Thank you again for letting me poke around in your playground :).