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Fic: Vers: VI: Crowsflight

May 27, 2009 17:42

Parts: I | II | III | IV | V | VI | VII

- - -
nothing which we are to perceive in this world equals
the power of your intense fragility:whose texture
compels me with the color of its countries,
rendering death and forever with each breathing
- E. E. Cummings
- - -

( (This always happens at the worst moment.) )

vers, fic: smallville

Comments 15

snackbreak May 27 2009, 16:55:46 UTC

Oh Lois. She just makes my heart hurt, all the time. I love her so much.

You've made me grin at my work computer screen, in full view of everyone, but I just can't help it. I'm so happy that Clark told her, because especially after this last season of drama, I can't see her ever believing he loves her without him saying it directly to her face.

Guh, I love your writing. Thanks for updating, love it to PIECES <3

penumbra May 30 2009, 21:47:51 UTC

Oh Lois. She just makes my heart hurt, all the time. I love her so much.

That's how I feel about her too, especially after season eight.

You've made me grin at my work computer screen, in full view of everyone, but I just can't help it. I'm so happy that Clark told her, because especially after this last season of drama, I can't see her ever believing he loves her without him saying it directly to her face.

Hah, I'm glad you liked it. I agree: I think it's something Lois really needs to hear. I think -- sadly -- Lois thinks that Clark doesn't care about her at all; maybe that he doesn't even like her. I find that heartbreaking.

chrisluvstommy May 27 2009, 17:24:31 UTC

That is the sweetest *sigh* ever great job!

penumbra May 30 2009, 21:48:23 UTC

Thankyou.

_touched May 27 2009, 17:26:13 UTC

I hope this is not the end, because I want to see where they go from here, you have written them so beautifully. And, I have emmencely enjoyed reading this. I has become one of my favorite SV Clark and Lois fan fiction's.

And, the fact that you pay that much attention to detail and your imagery is so vivid, that I can picture everything in my mind perfectly clear, makes it even more enjoyable.

You are an amazing writer. :)

penumbra May 30 2009, 21:50:14 UTC

It's not quite the end, although it is almost there. Thankyou, though: I enjoyed writing it. ♥

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penumbra May 30 2009, 21:50:39 UTC

Aw, thankyou.

alejandrita439 May 27 2009, 21:22:02 UTC

that was so beautiful :)
i love it :D

continue with this please ::D

penumbra May 30 2009, 21:51:34 UTC

Thankyou. There is at least one more part left to tell.