[HanaKimi] Can you keep a secret?

[exwaiz]

Title: Can you keep a secret?
Pairing: NakatsuxKayashima
Theme: 15. perfect blue
Disclaimer: Characters = not mine.

Comments

[kasugai_gummie]

ASDLFKJERH ::BRAIN EXPLODES FROM WAFF OVERDOSE::

Simple and sweet and FUCK WAIFEY. YOUR MIZUKI IS PERFECT. She gives off the sense of utter oblivion and yet comes out with sparkling moments of clarity and insight that even throw Kayashima off track and-- XD

“Kayashima, can I have my water now?” Nakatsu asked.

“What are you doing, sleeping in public?” Sano asked at the same time.

THAT LINE. TICKLED ME PINK. har har I'm so witty

The last line too, made me think of higher things and fanciful dreams and any more of this, I'll be waxing poetics at you and try to woe you even though we're already married. :P

[exwaiz]

I think I'm getting worse with comment replies. XDDD

Hehe. Mizuki is easily one of my favorite female characters, so I took a long time trying to make this one work. ^^;

*notices something* 0_0
*re-reads* @______@

But...see, this is what happens when I write fic while deprived of sleep.

...WHO THE HELL IS MITSUKI??? OMG. *headdesk*

I will now stab my hand, crawl to that corner and just die now.

[kasugai_gummie]

::thwaps you:; Yes. Yes you are.... but so was I. ::hides::

So how's it hanging? XD;

::laughsnort:: I wasn't sure who Mitsuki was either, but since you'd used it pretty often in the fic, I began having doubts on who Mizuki was. ::snuggles teh Waifey:: ♥

[measuringlife]

*le squee* This is adorable, you really hit it pitch perfect here :D Also, I have much love for this pairing and am glad to see someone writing it ♥. Have you done any more?

[exwaiz]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Nice to see other NakaxKaya fans. ^_-

And yes, I do have more. You can check this post right HERE for the link.

[sparkism]

And I think I reviewed this one on ff.net too! But I think this one has to be my favorite so far. Like, seriously. ♥ *squee*