sometimes a meat pie is just a meat pie, dad.

[eye_of_the_hipo]

so this is a comment i got from my dad about my meat pie review blog-
Great writing. Try adding some musings about life and make the meat pie a allegory, and you're on your way to a great short novel.

Comments

[jerkworthy]

musings about life are the surest path to written failure.

[waxcherries]

aww, he's just trying to help