Elephant in the room

Apr 23, 2010 15:13

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sour_plums April 29 2010, 06:07:54 UTC
I love the way you started this off. Seemed to be just a normal Christmas memory, but then it turned into something more.

I LOVE that you used Suki in it. I like how you introduce Suki in the beginning, and close it off at the end, especially since Suki is an elephant, and the elephant in the room is the topic of the story.

Good job, I'm moved by this.

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quill_quirks April 30 2010, 01:18:13 UTC
I love the way you told the story. Quite nice. The elephant in the room is just in the mind mostly. But, occasionally it is cuddled in the arms of a young girl.

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onedog2hearts May 6 2010, 08:24:20 UTC
heya, it's Jodi. Just FYI. :D My writing journal.

Let me know what you think of my just for fun story!

I know, it's really short. LOL

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