Fic: soliandxypne's giftfic.

[eyesofshinigami]

I'm entirely too tired tonight to answer comments, but thank you guys for commenting on my challenge fic. <33 I decided that I'm going to scrap it and start over, so I'll be sure to check everyone's comments tomorrow

Comments

[gen50]

*laughs* thank you for the explanation for loveless. i dont know loveless,
have never seen it. (the fighter/sacrifice thing reminded me of duels -
yugi-oh, xia lin showdown, samurai jack)

none-the-less, i liked it.

and on the nc-17 scene, there was no mention of a target...
and as i thought, it didnt take anything away from the scene

i rather like the idea of them with ears and tails, and that it proclaimed them virgins. i noticed you said nothing about hazel having ears. *grins*
or did i just miss reading it....of course it doesnt they didnt have ears, but..

the ending is rather pretty. i love happy endings in my fanfics.

[eyesofshinigami]

You really should check it out! Loveless is both a beautiful anime and a lovely manga. It doesn't hurt that Yun Kouga and Kazuya Minekura are good buddies. ^_____^ Yun Kouga does a lot of shonen-ai work, and she and Minekura actually collaborated on a doujin together. I think I sent you the scans...if not, I will.

Target? Hmm. Not quite sure what you mean.

I like the idea of Sanzo and Goku with kitty ears, too! soliandxypne actually sent me a pic where Minekura drew Soubi and Ritsuka, which are the characters from Loveless. <33 And of course, keire_ke's lovely drawing...*giggle*

You're right...Hazel didn't have ears. *cackles* Besides, we all know he's a pervert and he probably got rid of them really early on.

The ending...I wasn't sure about, but it just decided it was going to come out like that. *sighs happily* It went over well, though. That's all that matters.

Thanks, Gen-chan! Glad you liked it!

[soliandxpyne]

::cackles delightedly:: Oh, oh, and I'd totally forgotten the part about Gat and Hazel being another team they came up against until I read it! XDDD Xpyne's sleeping right now, but I'll have to make sure she reads this, too.

Yay! Saiyuki meets Loveless, awesome... Trying to imagine Goku and (especially) Sanzo with ears and a tail is so cute. Yeah, Sanzo seems the very twitchy-tail type. ::grins slyly:: Well, not anymore, seeing as Goku divested him of that.

Parts I loved:

only a matter of time before he annoyed his partner into submission Heh, submission. >:d

Sanzo assuring Goku he's not useless; the way Goku's pupils slit when he goes into Fighter mode and him using lightning in the battle; the Sanzo-esque tough love --> "I'll kill you myself! chuuuuu"; Sanzo being helpless against Goku-logic; Goku's adorably sweet little speech about how he was glad they were meant to be together; both of their eager inexperience

[eyesofshinigami]

*laughs* You were the one who requested it, silly goose! But yes, I had fun writing Hazel and Gat as the opposing team. Just because I liked seeing Goku get to open up a can of whoop-ass on him

[keire_ke]

Catbois, mmmm.

The reaction I'm having is OMG ShO ChUTEEEE!!!! Sanzo with kitty ears, honestly. *giggle* Even though I know next to nothing about Loveless, this was definitely worth reading (KITTTY TAAAAILS). And the lemon was hot. :P Goku on top just pwns it all. Like Soli said, Sanzo will forever have to remember Goku took his ears. XD I almost feel for him. Almost.

Your use of Goku!Logic is awesome.

SANZO: But there is so much to consider, I'm a mean prick and you're an idiot monkey, I have no human emotion whatsoever, not that I need any or anyone, and...
GOKU: Love you.
SANZO: ... and we should lose the clothes and get in bed. What are you standing there for, like a moron?

[gen50]

i loved the illustration. thank you for linking it

[keire_ke]

^_____^ Thankies!

[eyesofshinigami]

That picture is made of win, honestly. I saved it onto my computer. *grins*

I LOVE the idea of Sanzo with kitty ears. It's just too cute. And you should check out Loveless...it's tasty! And the manga is BEAUTIFUL! And, like I told gen50, it doesn't hurt that Minekura and Yun Kouga are good buddies. I'll have to send you the doujin they collaborated together.

And we all know that secretly Sanzo loves it when Goku tops.

Goku!logic reigns supreme. We all know that by now. There's no way that Sanzo could even THINK about standing up to that. Besides, Sanzo's way too overly analytical anyway...

Sanzo: (afterwards) I don't know about this. What if...
Goku: *kiss* I love you.
Sanzo: *brain melts* Goodnight, Goku.

[cryptjo]

Aaah! I love this!!! Saiyuki + Loveless = very happy Jo! :D

Wow, what a fantastic idea for a story and it works so well. The smut's pretty good too! :D

And they created a doujin together?! I did not know that!

[eyesofshinigami]

*GLOMP* Long time no see, Jo-chan! And I read your post about being consumed by KH...so it's understandable. *nodnod* That game ate me up inside when I first got it too. ^____~

You can thank soliandxpyne for the idea. ^______^ I was surprised that it worked as well as it did, and I had waaaaaay too much having Goku be the Fighter unit. Not to mention loving the fact that he beat the snot out of Hazel. *giggle*

Yesh they did! Eventually I'll have to send it to you! ^________^ It's really cute and Kouga-sensei's renditions of the Saiyuki boys are BEAUTIFUL. <333

At any rate, thanks! *huggles you tightly*

[cryptjo]

I'm soooo late with getting the game, LOL. I actually rarely play games and this is one of the reasons why. I have such a terribly obsessive personality, hah-hah.

I would love to see the doujin - it sounds adorable! I love the artwork in Loveless (especially Soubi).

*hugs back*

[eyesofshinigami]

*laughs* I know what you mean. This is why I have the tendency to buy games and only play them half-way through. I get too distracted by the shiny. *giggles* Then my sib has to finish it for me, and I take all the credit. XDD

Of course! If you gimme your email, I'll send you the pic I have that Minekura drew of Soubi and Ritsuka too. It's pwetty too! And they look remarkably like Sanzo and Goku...I wonder why that is? Hmm?

[checkerbloom]

GAAHH!!! How did I mis this??? Ohmigod! Saiyuki+Loveless= SQUEEE!

Only Sanzo could make an insult sound like a sweet nothing. *gibber* you pwn my soul!

[eyesofshinigami]

Hee hee hee. See, I thought you'd like that. ^_____^

This idea had been plaguing me for a while, and then it consumed my brain one night when I sat down to write.

And besides...the very idea of Sanzo with cat ears is too cute!

Did you see keire_ke's picture she drew? Look up in her comment if not. It's tashty and it goes well with my story. *giggle*

*hugs*