Drabble Post #5

Mar 15, 2008 01:39

I come bearing drabbles, and a special treat!

These are pretty 39/93 centric, but it's something, right? I'm really proud of the second one, just so you know.

Title: Tangled Up In You
Pairing: 93
Prompt: “93 with the prompt ‘flexible’”
For soliandxpyne
A/N: The first smut drabble so far. Enjoy. XD

Tangled Up In You )

saiyuki, fanfic, 39, empyrealfantasy, drabble, random

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purpleicicles March 17 2008, 18:40:44 UTC
Hoooo, the image of Goku putting on a bit of a show for Sanzo is waaaaayyyyy too hot for my brain to cope with! Lucky Sanzo having his fantasies come true! ;3 The second fic was right on the button - Goku's feelings and how he relates them to Hakkai were very well characterised, and Hakkai's reply was so very enlightened and like him! The pure simplicity and understanding there was what really made it. :)

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eyesofshinigami March 19 2008, 04:02:09 UTC
Isn't it, though? I've always wanted to do something like that. A voyeur!Sanzo is a fun Sanzo. ^______^

The second one is one of my favorites that I've written so far. I really, really liked the way this one came out. I'm really proud of it. I was trying to incorporate the feelings that I figured Goku could be feeling.

Hakkai usually gives me so much trouble when I write him, but he went very smoothly in this. I was glad that his voice came out sounding the way I wanted it to!

Thanks darling! *huggles you tightly*

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soliandxpyne March 26 2008, 13:03:23 UTC
::drools like a rabid fagurl:: yesssss, finally, my speacial after finals treat!! ♥ thank you so much!! i love it! :D

o ho ho, sanzo, curiosity can be dangerous. >:3 ahaha, it's cute how Sano thinks Goku doesn't know he was followed. more like he left you a trail, Sanzo. X)

While he would deny it should anyone ask, Sanzo knew good and well that his charge was attractive. heck yeah, Sanzo can't go giving Goku a big head by mentioning that sort of thing! Goku is so gorgeous; I leer at him all the time. such a pretty image of Goku flexing and stretching out in the open. *__* hehehe, Sanzo!! ::is scandalized:: <--not rlly don't just whip it out and jack it in public underbrush, like some creeper! eheheh, but somehow I don't think Goku minds. ;3 ooooh, yes, 93 lovin' all the way ( ... )

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eyesofshinigami March 26 2008, 17:34:14 UTC
Fweeee! I'm so glad! Especially after that gorgeous picture you drew me!

*GRINS* I really couldn't think of anything else to do with the prompt, so I thought that Sanzo following Goku and watching him stretch would be absolutely awesome. And I remembered from another post that you said you and Soli liked a little Sanzo self-love, so I thought I would throw that into the mix as well. ^___~ And come on...voyeur!Sanzo FTW Goku is utterly gorgeous, and I have to say that I indulged in a little monkey-worship here. *laughs*

I was going to take it further and actual smut it up but my smut skills abandoned meI thought it would be more fun to leave it to the imagination. I may extend it later, but for now I liked where it ended.

And him having trouble walking was the point. ^___~

I am sooooooooo glad that you enjoyed it! And yes, I knew that your schedule was crazy, but hopefully now you'll be able to relax and enjoy yourself a bit! You know, in between all the other things that you have planned. *laughs*

I ended up crashing last ( ... )

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soliandxpyne March 26 2008, 23:15:42 UTC
hohoho, soli is the voyeur, but i appreciate it as well. >:d sexy! i think we need to perpetuate more goku worship. ::nods:: he is a hot little tamale, that's for darn sure. :)

lol! no, it was still smutty, so i appreciated it. full-blown sex often needs a full blown plot to enhance and support it, but bjs and handjobs and self-lovin' oh my! are perfect for drabbles and ficlets.

Sanzo limping is HOT. erm, i mean ::cough:: yes. hehe relaxing is goood, and dont worry, i almost always am enjoying myself (that sounds a little wrong, actually...) even when, perhaps especially when?, things are crazy. ^___^

lol, i figured, but i left my AIM window up just in case, hehe. i think i want to make a new sn that's "xpyne" or something, so i can stop hiding in invisible mode from old school acquaintances, ha! but AIM is such a distraction, that's why i avoid using it unless i have specifically set up a meet time with someone to chat. :3 i might go on later tonight, depends if im sleepy or not. and i'm not a big phone chatter, but i ( ... )

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eyesofshinigami March 26 2008, 23:26:53 UTC
>_< Damn it. I can never remember things like that. And here I was thinking I was all slick and stuff. *falls over*

Too true, too true. Though, I did have a lot of fun writing this anyway. I still plan to go with the original idea that I had for your prompt, so you may get your full-blown smut yet! I actually wrote another fic with Sanzo and masturbation, which I need to post. XD

You're so funny. *laughs* But that's okay. <3 And that's good! <3 I wish I could be like that. >_>

Well, I got so flustered and everything that it was a big pain in the ass. >_< But yeah, if you do, let me know and I'll copy that sn down. And yay for random calls and text messages! And you can expect me to do the same. ^___~

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saphira112 March 26 2009, 04:10:33 UTC
Ironic? First drabble, I had "Life in Technicolor ii" by Coldplay playing and I could just see Goku moving to the tune. It was funny when Sanzo got caught XD I was all, "Ooooooo~ BUSTED!" like the immature brat I am :D

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eyesofshinigami March 26 2009, 16:08:12 UTC
*laughs* I'm glad that you enjoyed it! If you would like, I could add you and you could catch up with some of the other 393 stuff that I have on my LJ. :)

♥ Glad you liked them!

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saphira112 March 26 2009, 16:13:45 UTC
Be my guest! I wanna read mooooorrreeee :D

<3

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