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Alphabet Meme - O - Mischief Unmanaged - Heath x Dimitri

Oct 10, 2011 19:01

Title: Obsession
Rating: R
Warnings: Sexual themes, Dimitri's a freak
Words: 869
Series: Mischief Unmanaged (Harry Potter-based RP)
Pairings/Characters: Heath x Dimitri, Vincent

( A summer apart and Dimitri was obsessed at first sight. )

w: 801-900, c: dimitri rejkavich, *challenge: alphabet meme, c: vincent callaghan, **mongoliabun, rating: r, s: mischief unmanaged (hpau), c: heath owens

Comments 3

TOO LAZY TO SIGN OUT OF WALLY chemwhiz October 11 2011, 05:19:07 UTC

dshflsdkfj I LOVE HOW THIS PAIRING GOT SO FUCKED UP??? Seriously how did this even happen. I don't know, I don't care, it's beautiful and THERE CAN NEVER BE ENOUGH.

THEN I'M TOO LAZY TO SIGN OUT OF KARA teengirlofsteel October 11 2011, 07:46:42 UTC

I DON'T EVEN KNOW, MAN.

and I'm glad you liked it! ;w;

abacusaddict20 March 9 2012, 00:08:20 UTC

Oh my god this fic. This freaking fic. This is a masterpiece. The progression over time, the slow fall of Dimitri from a good student to an obsessed, possessive mess, and the pacing is just perfect. And just the fact that Heath doesn't know what's happening. You are great at writing unhealthy relationships as proper, unhealthy relationships.

I like Vincent's reaction to Dimitri's final straw in terms of grades. I kind of wonder how that meeting went. I also really like the huge contrast between what Dimitri is saying and what he's thinking. I think that is his strong point as a character in general. He says all these generally pretty nice, harmless things but he's just so messed up. I always love seeing more of him.