"I"

[eyetastelikesex]

I

I tried to write some poetry, but London

got in my way with her flashing
lights and happening scenes. Someone
teach me how to network with the white man.
I fucked a virgin in the ass and

she creamed - I was unsure
but she burned beef incense
and slowly trimmed my pubic hairs.
I read Eliot, Ginsberg, Shakespeare

Dylan, Poe, Plato, Nietzsche

Comments

[mr0krinkle]

III is like porngrind lyrics gone wrong, seriously.

I like it, the pattern is good and i like the flow of it all.

Plus mentions of me = ratings

[eyetastelikesex]

haha, porngrind, hahaha

glad you like it man, n' thanks for the comment.

[asphaltthenoon]

the rest is neat, but this:

I read Eliot, Ginsberg, Shakespeare

Dylan, Poe, Plato, Nietzsche
and Wittgenstein - yet still
knew nothing at all about Love.

is good, solid, heart-wrenching poetry. well done.

[eyetastelikesex]

many thanks my dutch canadian friend! I was rather proud of that stanza too.

[mekare_enra]

*applauds*

[eyetastelikesex]

aww yay! thanks :D

I'm glad you liked it!