I just decided to read this again before bed, and I'd like to echo the sentiment I parped forth the other night. I love this! Obviously, I was confused by the Steven, Steven, Steven at the end before you changed that, but other than that there's no room for complaints ;).
Awesome characterisation, as always. You really have a unique character in Steven, y'know. He has plenty of depth, but he isn't just a carbon copy of all other protagonists. I like him, and he pisses me off sometimes. That's the mark of a good character.
I love the Chloe/Steven familial relationship, too. Very real, sincere.
I'm glad you love it! and yeah the multiple steven thing was confuddling! hehe.
I am SO PLEASED you said that about steven. because the one thing I like about him is that he's very realistic, and that's also an aim I have when I write him. I want him to be so real you feel you could have a convo with him, y'know?
and I'm also glad you think the sibling relationship they have is good! coz I really want that to be good and non-forced for personal reasons.
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Awesome characterisation, as always. You really have a unique character in Steven, y'know. He has plenty of depth, but he isn't just a carbon copy of all other protagonists. I like him, and he pisses me off sometimes. That's the mark of a good character.
I love the Chloe/Steven familial relationship, too. Very real, sincere.
Good work, m'dear!
xx
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I am SO PLEASED you said that about steven. because the one thing I like about him is that he's very realistic, and that's also an aim I have when I write him. I want him to be so real you feel you could have a convo with him, y'know?
and I'm also glad you think the sibling relationship they have is good! coz I really want that to be good and non-forced for personal reasons.
glaaad you liked it :)
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