Two Steps Ahead

[eyetastelikesex]

The room was black. Moonlight from a solitary window. I hammered against the wall with his fists, I wore no gloves; Bare-Knuckle

Comments

[mekare_enra]

So bleak, but so good.

I love the short and sharp sentences.

You write well, my dear Mo.

xx

[eyetastelikesex]

thanks emma.

I wish I wasn't in the mood to write this, but eh.

I'm glad you liked the short and sharp sentences. I'm a big fan of them, they make it easy to build a rhythm too. like in this piece, they kept getting shorter, heightening the pace of it.

thanks again, my numba one fan! <3

:)