Fire and Rain

[eyetastelikesex]

Cold wind ripping down the valley of dawn, the morning paper flies; "AXIS IS DEAD" is the headline. Felled by a brain tumour only hours after his moment of triumph at Defiance. A tragedy that shook the world. And the world was here to mourn. The cemetery was a mass of people, almost jockeying for position. Even now, The Icon sparked conflict and

Comments

[mekare_enra]

Great stuff, as per usual!

Very dramatic *fans face*. I'm not very interested in fighting and such as a whole, but it's very readable in your stories...and I still think the relationships between the characters are incredibly real.

You write Steven brilliantly, but I suppose that's to be expected - you have had plenty of practice, after all ;)

xx

[eyetastelikesex]

hehe, I'm glad you like it! :)

I'm also pleased that the fighting n' shit is readable even though you don't like it. I mean, even though it's central to the character I don't want it to be central to him, if that makes any sense. because, as you sorta said, the relationships are what I find most fascinating. so I'm really glad you find them to be real.

thanks for the feedback, as always!

[pvc_siren]

bout time! lol good stuff.

[eyetastelikesex]

hehe. you like eh?