The Other Side of The Coin

Jan 18, 2006 23:02


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Massachusetts countryside blurs past. Steven and Callia in a Porsche Carrera. Top-down; sun in the eyes, hair in the wind, stereo blasts "THEM BONES".

I believe, them bones, are me.
Some say, we're born, into the grave.

April 2003. Yesterday, he buried Demon Knight and Yungstar. Now focus is on the Next Challenge.

STEVEN Callia ( Read more... )

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He didn't deserve that maytel January 19 2006, 04:16:51 UTC
Holy SHIATS!

You are the best in the whole world! I couldn't dream of writting that way in english (even in french).

This couple affects me. You know when you're addicted to a certain book and you constantly want to read it when you're doing something else? Well I have that feeling with Steve and Callia.

I love how they are both emotionally fucked up, just like I am. Callia makes me think of me, it's really scary.
It's a love/hate relationship I'm having with those 2.

I also thought you'd like to see how the french part is written. I tried to make it as accurate as possible.

CALLIA: {I love you. I just need... I need time. Nothing will ever come between us, I promise. I will never hurt you.}

CALLIA: Je t'aime. J'ai seulement besoin de... temps. Rien ne pourra jamais nous faire de mal, je te le promets. Je ne te ferai jamais de mal.

Ohhh.. but she did!

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Re: He didn't deserve that eyetastelikesex January 19 2006, 14:41:34 UTC
awww wow man, I'm like, well happy.

that's great feedback, thanks!

and yeah they're both totally fucked, but they love each other. hopefully it'll all work out! :(

why love/hate?

man, french is hot.

and yeah she did. not that he didn't hurt her too. the morons!

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Re: He didn't deserve that maytel January 19 2006, 16:24:37 UTC
love/hate because they keep on hurting each other like it's the thing to do when you're in love. But It is realistic, unlike the happily ever after bullshit. I guess that's what pisses me off.
I hope it'll work out between these 2 because they go well together.

ok .. write more!!! MORE I TELL YOU!!!

haha
x0x

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Re: He didn't deserve that eyetastelikesex January 19 2006, 16:29:51 UTC
ahh yeah, that's what I thought, just wanted to confirm!

and yes, I WILL WRITE MORE, later...

:D

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ladymarm January 20 2006, 13:43:46 UTC
Just gave it a second reading to be sure, but yeah, I stand by yesterday's discussion.

Well done.

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