1년 정거장 (Seunghyun's POV)

[f_i_x_m_e]

Title: 1년 정거장 (Seunghyun's POV)
Author: f_i_x_m_e
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Seunghyun drinks his sorrows away each night, wondering if his lover has gotten over him yet.
Genre: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Pairing: G-TOP
Author Notes: Yeah, the sequel! Though you could read either one first and it would still make sense. This one goes on a bit longer though~ I hope

Comments

[jemnise]

SPOT!

[jemnise]

it makes me giggle when people use Hyunnie and Yongie. aigoooooooooooo kkkkkk i can't stop giggling like hell. i am like a maniac or a retard helluva LMFAOOOO

i am on crack or something. sorry. but this is wonderful bb. i love how you conveyed SeungHyun's feelings. His worries and how it was all erased after seeing a blonde JiYong.

bahahaha :)

ily XD

[f_i_x_m_e]

8D

I'm glad you liked it, bb!^^

ily2~

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[xbigbangx]

aww. this srslyl made my heart kinda go -doki doki- haha.
it was just so cute~!! I love this so much~! ^^ :3
I just love how I can kinda feel what Seunghyun is feeling <33
It made me cry just a tad bit with happiness really ^^
Hope you write another GTOP fic soon~ : DD

[f_i_x_m_e]

Haha, glad you liked it!^^

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[tabi]

I actually thought this was a bit... rushed? I don't know if it's just me but the transition from the hardship that Seunghyun faced bc of his family to him missing Jiyong wasn't smooth.

IMO, it would have been nicer if there was more description on the difficulties Seunghyun had faced without Jiyong. And for someone who had initially disapproved of his relationship with Jiyong, his mother took it quite well?

Idk, just my two cents. :]

[f_i_x_m_e]

Ah yeah...I get what you're saying...
That's what I get for writing fics when I'm barely awake. ^^;
But then again I always seem to rush my writing.

I'll try harder to make my next fic better.

Thanks for reading and giving feedback.

[ingenu3]

i read & i loved.

hyunnie&yongie = love

=DD

happppy happppy *dance about

[f_i_x_m_e]

Haha!
*hugs*

Thanks for reading and commenting.

[fullofwishes]

Ahh, Choi appa! *sobs* Well, at least there was a good explanation for him leaving. Seunghyun is a good son/brother. Too bad that he wasn't exactly the best boyfriend and (totally drama style) provided no explanation in the beginning and only returned when he was cut free of his responsibilities by his mother. Who I'm guessing only came around because she saw how miserable he was. (Though typically she would've tried to set him up or something and given him more grief before her conscience finally overcame her pride, Kdrama tyrant!umma style. XD)
...but if I were Jiyong I would've probably punched him first, then hugged him. LOL. I just don't see him being acceptive upon his return, no matter how much he wished for it.

LOL I'm tired-rambling. Anyway, this was very very sweet, like the first part. I think we do need to cut them some slack on the angst (just a bit) sometimes, and this did give the butterfly feeling.

Keep writing baby~ (Something with me again soon!) &hearts

[f_i_x_m_e]

Aish, yeah...
It probably would've been more interesting if more drama was involved.
But that's what I get for writing while I was tired...
I kinda didn't want to make it longer because I wanted both fics to be of the same length, since either can be read on its own, but I dunno...

Thanks boo~^^

Aish...I think next time I write it will have to be with you, baby~
I'm lacking the confidence to write solo fics...all I come up are short, mediocre ones like this.^^;
I feel most comfortable writing with you..

[fullofwishes]

Oh, I understand about writing while tired. That's when I feel most inspired and sometimes eloquent, but mostly it just turns off my filter and some strange fic comes out. LOL

I wouldn't say mediocre, short, yes, but I get what you mean about keeping it around the same length. (One of the main reasons I tend to write mostly oneshots is that when I feel restricted the story becomes very abrupt. XD)

You lack confidence without me...? *blush* Well, I seem to lack drive without you~

[f_i_x_m_e]

Yeah!
It's when I feel inspired too.
I don't feel eloquent though...

Ooooh I know what you mean about oneshots.
You saw what happened with my chaptered fic. XDDD
I rush myself as well...*sigh*

*blushes too*
I may not be the best co-writer...but be patient and I'll get better.
Then we can write something really amazing.