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Jul 11, 2008 22:43

Don't fret precious
I'm here
Step away from the window
Go
Back to sleep
Safe from
Pain
And truth
And choice
And other poison devils
See
They don't give a fuck about you
Like I do

being cryptic?, doesn't always have to make sense

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moonlit_mirage July 12 2008, 05:53:33 UTC
That is an interesting poem, Tenko-san. It seems melancholy though. Perhaps I could inspire you to happier thoughts?

Among the purple
Lilac, shyly she peeks.
Robin flits away.

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f_oxily July 12 2008, 06:01:08 UTC
Really? It makes me feel kind of giddy~ That's a pretty little thing you wrote, though.

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moonlit_mirage July 12 2008, 06:14:11 UTC
I am sorry it couldn't inspire something happier. Perhaps I should have gone with the imagery of a pony?

But if your piece gives you pleasure than that is good. It simply seemed... less than cheerful.

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f_oxily July 12 2008, 06:20:18 UTC
Pony?

It's got nothing to do with cheer. Just makes me feel comfortable.

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iniquiticity July 12 2008, 06:43:41 UTC
And you accuse me of being cryptic?

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f_oxily July 12 2008, 06:47:38 UTC
I learn from example.

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iniquiticity July 12 2008, 06:48:15 UTC
How clever of you.

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f_oxily July 12 2008, 06:49:45 UTC
I like to think so, though this isn't really an example.

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f_oxily July 12 2008, 06:55:59 UTC
Thank you~

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rustyarmor July 12 2008, 20:30:34 UTC
I don't get it... maybe you should go out and get some exercise?

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f_oxily July 12 2008, 21:27:41 UTC
Why do you say that?

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rustyarmor July 12 2008, 23:05:37 UTC
Maybe the exercise would get your mind off of whatever's bothering you?

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f_oxily July 12 2008, 23:08:07 UTC
Who said anything was bothering me?

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snowburned July 14 2008, 02:15:16 UTC
That's-

[OOC: She starts to write a comment but thinks better of it. Her handwriting is cramped and shouldn't be identifiable beneath the scratch.]

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f_oxily July 14 2008, 02:24:27 UTC
Don't be afraid~ I'm open to constructive criticism~

(( OOC; He can't tell who, but he stills wants to chat ))

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