100quills entry: Prepare

[fabricatedemons]

Title: Not Spying
Author: fabricatedemons
Rating: G
Prompt Set: 100.1
Prompt: 074 Prepare.
Word Count: 801
Summary: Severus is watching Lily in the park again.
Warning: Deathly Hallows Spoilers

Comments

1) ABOUT TIME YOU CAME BACK!

[randomneses]

2) Awww...I really love this ickle!Snape and ickle!Lily fic. I really liked how you described Lily's actions and body language in response to Petunia's. It was a very nice touch. And Snape wanted to tell her to wait...*Sigh*

And the last sentence...*more sigh* Well...he'll talk to her plenty of times alright >_>

[ink_addict]

This was awesome. Really really awesome. I love the little details and the sort of quiet emotion in it. Good!