Comments | fabriclies: my name is melancholy.

fabriclies

my name is melancholy.

Sep 26, 2009 20:51

( you watch them get married in the church around the corner from that park you two always played in as kids with laughter as high as the sky and dandelion necklaces falling apart around your necks. )

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Comments 27

prototypic September 27 2009, 04:02:13 UTC

this is... beautiful. and like, i'm placing this in my memories just because it's that good. it kinda aches in a way, and there are so many lines that stand out and just -- strikes a chord, if you know what i mean.

also, it kinda makes me tear.

ai_sumairu September 27 2009, 04:13:12 UTC

It's beautiful!!! I love everything... It's sad but then as I was reading it, it's as if I was there and was watching the whole thing unfold...

he isn't missing, you know, but you figure out that your heart is. - Love this line. :)

fabriclies October 8 2009, 03:52:52 UTC

fayee, i don't deserve you ):

ai_sumairu October 15 2009, 10:44:14 UTC

WHAT?! D: What do you mean you don't deserve me?! Of course you do!!! ;_;

raenism September 27 2009, 04:35:09 UTC

this is so fucking gorgeous, you don't even know.

fabriclies September 28 2009, 22:19:48 UTC

you're so fucking gorgeous, you don't even know ):

tempest_amity September 27 2009, 04:46:28 UTC

they spin and spin, and spin, until it's hard to tell the difference from two to one.

you can see how he calls her beautiful, with her violet red lips and dainty hands that could paint smoke into the air.

he isn't missing, you know, but you figure out that your heart is.

you never planned to stay that long, just to say 'congrats' because you're still his best friend, still the person he comes to when he wants to cry, but you're not going to be for much longer.

I could just quote the whole damn thing, why are you so brilliant.

fabriclies October 13 2009, 00:25:42 UTC

did you notice, the way you quoted isn't in order :D

sedhjkgh. i'm not. you only think so because you don't know how insane i am.

tempest_amity October 13 2009, 01:26:13 UTC

Yes, I noticed.

You're insane? Come join me in this here asylum...We can play in the wall with no corners.

ximadinosaur September 27 2009, 04:56:06 UTC

WOW I LOVE YOU AND THIS.

fabriclies September 28 2009, 22:18:01 UTC

HEY HEY, I NEED YOUR ADDRESS AGAIN BECAUSE IDK IF YOU KNOW BUT MY LAPTOP DIED AND I LOST EVERYTHING D:

i hate how much i miss you

ximadinosaur September 29 2009, 01:09:16 UTC

oh oh this must be my 23894th time giving it to you

824 maddux dr
daly city, ca 94015

i hate it too.

hey stranger,
we dont talk anymore :\

fabriclies October 13 2009, 00:27:20 UTC

i am slowly producing mail to be sent off, lmfao.

hey, hey, someone i remember loving.
why are we like this.

btw, what kind of candy do you like

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