Comments | fabriclies: feels like yesterday; hyukjae centric.

fabriclies

feels like yesterday; hyukjae centric.

Oct 12, 2009 18:02

( instead, you tell them about the boy with long legs and pretty hands that likes daffodils. they form words of heartbreak and start taking your hands, spinning you around and trying to make you forget. )

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hezai October 13 2009, 02:44:25 UTC

I feel like quoting stuff or rather, everything but that I'm in school so...

Ugh, your stuff never fail to prod at the doors of my heart T___T

fabriclies October 17 2009, 05:20:38 UTC

i never got that. my school blocks websites like livejournal /sadfaces forever. but anyways, thank you oh so very much. i didn't even know you read my stuff, let alone like it, so is forever grateful. ♥

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fabriclies October 17 2009, 05:23:13 UTC

you're so nice, idek ): ♥

lol, this style is the easiest for me but i think people would get sick of it if i wrote like this all the time so i rarely use 2nd person for anything other than freewrite. i'm glad you like it though, even with the nonsensical heartbreak and shadows. ;x thanks for taking the time to comment. ♥ ♥

prototypic October 13 2009, 03:22:59 UTC

oh god, nhi. that was - is - beautiful and jksdfjksdf you tell me your writing doesn't improve but it does, it does every single time you write. i'm so in love with this and it kinda reminds me of your free-writing. like everyone up there, i'd quote specific lines but i'd end up quoting the entire thing back at you anyway. just... ♥♥♥

plus i like how you did the repetition with 'don't fall in love with -', and then had the word fell for each time. it was cute and surprising and yeah.

you're an awesome writer, nhiiiiii.

fabriclies October 17 2009, 05:28:24 UTC

you got a new default picture. /random. but gah. this isn't improving kaye, this is, i don't even know. some level of crazie that people should not be able to reach. and hey, just wondering but do you like my freewrite or fanfic more?

you are so amazing and perfect ): i didn't think anyone would notice that the number of 'fell's matched up and idk, that it was all for repetition. you and noticing things, it kind of makes me feel special, i don't know. like maybe maybe someone understands and it's okay. you're flat out awesomee kaye ): and i will beat you at minesweeper flags one day ♥

prototypic October 17 2009, 05:45:52 UTC

yeah, i uploaded a bunch too :D it's the good kind of crazy, then. i like your freewrite more, actually.

i am not amazing or perfect ): it was a nice effect :) and you're speciallllll, okay.

childishgrin October 13 2009, 03:58:16 UTC

I'm glad I clicked on the link.

Gawd, this was beautiful. I had to re-read a few passages as I went along because the words just kept pulling me back.

fabriclies October 17 2009, 05:31:13 UTC

i'm glad you did too ♥ thank you for taking the time to comment, it really means a lot. lmfao, i sound insincere, but it really, really does since this fic, although borderline insane, kind of holds a part of me to it. to think that it had any effect on you, just thank you. ♥

quinnsan October 13 2009, 04:07:54 UTC

Oh my god, this is....my god. I'm at a loss for words, and that it is in a very good way.

fabriclies October 17 2009, 05:33:25 UTC

me making you all speechless and stuff. ;x i'm forever grateful that you took the time to leave a comment, even if just stating your loss of words. i think it's really sweet ♥