Comments | fabriclies: a quieter world.

fabriclies

a quieter world.

Jan 16, 2010 15:34

( the next day, they leave a voice message saying sorry and resignation letters on their bunk beds with small drawers empty and don't look back. )

suju: sungmin, #fanfiction, suju: leeteuk, suju: eunhyuk, wc; 1201 - 1400, suju: donghae

Comments 44

headless_bex January 17 2010, 09:38:00 UTC

Wowww.
You and thundersquall, who also did a fic on that poem, have done it more justice than I ever could've hoped.
I love this so goddamn much.
<3

fabriclies January 20 2010, 06:19:00 UTC

you have no idea how nice it is to hear that because i honestly think so much could be done with that poem so thank you a lot ♥ also, thank you for reading and taking the time to comment :D

thundersquall January 17 2010, 12:44:28 UTC

Omg, Nhi, wow, this was absolutely gorgeous. I loved that prompt sfm and you totally did it justice, this was so so beautiful and sad and wow, I love it. ♥

fabriclies January 20 2010, 06:20:35 UTC

erunjgegkdh. sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeenaaaa, the comment above said that you wrote something off this prompt too so omo, this is me rushing to go find it after i reply to comments. i see you're as nice as always ;; thank you bby ♥

catskilt January 17 2010, 13:39:35 UTC

sdhlckjalcjh this is so beautifully written. I really like the flow of it, the story is as quiet as its premise, and the last few sections describing how they deal with only having 167 words a day are gorgeous. I also like how you talked about how that rule would affect trainees hoping to be idols, because really, how can anyone be an idol when you can only speak such a limited amount of words?

The last paragraph: life goes on. life goes on, with its problems and constant changes tinged with black and white. people die and fight and live and dream. they walk and occasionally talk and sleep and breathe. they love without words and hate all the same, but it's a quieter world is just. I don't know what to say. Probably one of the loveliest things I've ever seen written in fanfiction ♥

fabriclies January 20 2010, 06:27:46 UTC

dujkhsdijhdjsih ♥ maybe this sounds creepy but i've been in love with you(r writing) ever since that eunhae fic so getting such a sweet comment makes my heart sing and all that. i was going to drag all of suju into it to create huge epic fic ...but then my muse ran away, lol.

so before i ramble away too much; thank you forever. i think this is probably one of the loveliest comments i've received since i've started writing ♥

catskilt January 21 2010, 14:11:37 UTC

lksajdkj creepy not at all I'm just happy that you read my stuff! And I think this fic is fine just the way it is, your muse certainly did you good :DDD

You're totally welcome. I love giving praise where it is deserved ♥

dongbangsuju20 January 20 2010, 21:39:53 UTC

how do you explain the importance of freedom of speech in 167 words? how do you explain it's not enough when not enough happens and cuts you off?

♥

hi nhi

( ... )

dongbangsuju20 January 20 2010, 21:44:33 UTC

and it actually is itching me in the fingers to write something to this prompt but now I have read quite a few really awesome stories about it and idk if I could do it justice at all~

kitkii January 24 2010, 09:45:23 UTC

i love the way your writing isn't really a fanfic. it's like a bunch of truths tied together with people that are similar showing them to us.

It's kind of a miracle.

thank you for writing ♥