Comments | fabriclies: (2pm) untitled.

fabriclies

(2pm) untitled.

Aug 06, 2010 19:16

( everyone is practicing for the fifth night in a row. the concert has to be perfect, the dance has to be perfect, they have to be perfect, absolutely perfect. )

#fanfiction, 2pm: junho, 2pm: all, wc: 601 - 800

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fabriclies August 9 2010, 20:29:08 UTC

i'm glad you think so. thank you for reading and taking the time to comment!

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fabriclies August 9 2010, 20:29:55 UTC

yes, you are ♥

blezu August 7 2010, 03:42:13 UTC

you can see how he quickly searches the room a second time with a glance, and you know that you aren't the kind of perfect he's looking for.
i teared up at this line, gah
oh my god, this is not "really bad" at all. please tell me you'll write more.

fabriclies August 9 2010, 20:36:35 UTC

aww ;A; i wish i could say that i'll write more but i'm always at a block. thank you though. it was really sweet of you to leave a comment like this.

lovekyu August 7 2010, 04:17:45 UTC

i think it's creative and beautifully written :) it leaves enough interpretation for the reader

fabriclies August 9 2010, 20:37:22 UTC

thank you for thinking so. and for taking the time to leave a comment ♥

yeahprettyboy August 7 2010, 04:38:37 UTC

"you want to tell him to stop, stop, because the bed doesn't smell like jaebeom anymore, doesn't feel like jaebeom anymore, doesn't hold jaebeom anymore. that it hasn't for a long time." awwww

i was pretty much sighing through the whole thing.
and to me your "really bad" is freaken good.

fabriclies August 9 2010, 20:45:46 UTC

i don't know what to say other than thank you. the fact that you thought it was anything but bad is awfully flattering. ): ♥