Comments | fabriclies: disease; hankyung/heechul.

fabriclies

disease; hankyung/heechul.

Apr 27, 2009 18:58

( When Hankyung wakes up in the morning and sees the food still there, he figures that Heechul's eaten something else, somewhere else (but Heechul can barely manage a smile, let alone eat). )

suju: hankyung, #fanfiction, wc: 401 - 600, suju: heechul

Comments 11

keyah_chanloves April 27 2009, 23:25:39 UTC

I want to make a logical comment.
About how beautiful I think this is, but how badly it scares the living shit out of me.

But all I can think right now is, "Whyyyyyyyyyyy?! Heechulwhyyyy?!"

crimeis April 27 2009, 23:41:15 UTC

this breaks my heart. :((( massive ouch.
on another note, your diction is all kinds of amazing.

He pretends that Heechul's still everything that he's ever loved (and he is, he is) while he pushes the food around on his plate.

oh god. oh god. SOBS.

♥

reader_a April 28 2009, 05:18:28 UTC

it was intense.
Heechul should not do such things, no one should do such things...
*hugs Heechul and Hankyung*

it's really beautiful but at the same time so... well it scares me...

quinnsan April 28 2009, 06:25:57 UTC

I LOVE YOU SO HARD RIGHT NOW. That was freaking amazing! Write more? <33333 I love angst...ok I love all kinds of fic, but still. I want to know what happens next...does Hannie finally realize whats really going on? Do the other members start to notice? Does Heechul end up in the hospital? I'm so curious~

ellyatthedisco April 28 2009, 06:32:43 UTC

so beautiful! this was like the perfect capture of a few single moments. and so realistic! I love hanchul angst! why? I don't even know^^