Really well done. Great descriptions of all the scenes, and Darren's actions are all really Darren-y. And I loved how adorable they were about their experimenting. "I'm going to kiss you now." "That would be ok." LOL. So cute. Great work. :D
Hey, I love this story! This is actually my second time reading it. Happened to notice you wrote the last intimate scene starting out as in Chris`s bedroom, but then changed it to Darren`s room with Chris leaving after. I never noticed it the first time through all the amazingness. :P
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