The Boy From Ipanema

[facesandmasks]

Title: The Boy From Ipanema
Pairings: Yunjae
Rating: R
Warnings: Almost explicit smut towards the end of the story.
Genre: Romance
Summary: Who would expect that one would meet his love in Rio de Janeiro? Inspired by Ella Fitzegarld's "The Boy from Ipanema" song.



The Boy from Ipanema - Ella Fitzgerald

Tall and tan and young and handsome

Comments

[whu_ut_ut]

I definitely have time to read your oneshots, especially. So don't worry. Hahahahahah! Just tell me and I will read.

It felt so sweet and it was kinda fast for the smut part. Must be in a hurry to finish up that part kannnn. LOL!

At least, this one shot made my day. Its been so long since I last read a YunJae fic. Greattttt.

THANKS FOR MENTIONNING ME NEH~ Hahahahah!

[facesandmasks]

because you were feeling snappy which is why.

in a way, the smut part was true.

[love_cassiopeia]

Loved the smut! The song lyrics made it even better. I'm surprised that you had to watch porn in order to write this. Porn just seems a bit emotionless to me, but you've managed to squeeze emotion into this one =D

Looking forward to more of your works ^^

[facesandmasks]

Since it's my first attempt in writing smut, I couldn't visualise it in my mind until I had watched porn to even grasp how, where, what positions & styles to poke.

I admit that the ending looked kinda rushed but I always take the trouble to write a good story, since I'm not satisfied with half-hearted work. Unfortunately I had a mental block towards the end of the story, which gave the appearance of a rushed ending.

[love_cassiopeia]

Ah, I see. I was actually pretty embarrassed the first time I wrote smut, but as you can see, I've gotten over that embarrassment. Still, I think writing smut is really an art, especially because it showcases the writer's talent in descriptions and the building up of the characters' emotions.

*nods* I sometimes find myself doing the same. But alas writing is such a complicated task, it's really difficult to get a full grasp of it unless you make mistakes and correct them. It's based on experience =D

[facesandmasks]

Oh by the way, THANKS! =D

[kyrgyzs_tan]

You watched porn to write this? xDD Yeah, the sex in the shower was reminiscent of the porn movies, somewhat.

This is great smut, especially since this is your first time too :D

I thought it would be more hardcore though, since you watched porn to do this xDD

[facesandmasks]

Because I had no idea how to poke unless I view it for myself.

Since it's the first time writing this, I had no idea how to make it hardcore. Maybe you have ideas and suggestions to speak of? I'll be more than happy to hear it.

[kyrgyzs_tan]

hmmm, have you read wedspawn's smut? I don't write smut myself, but I think her smut's pretty good and perhaps if you read them (if you haven't already) you will know which details to put in to make it smuttier.

Maybe you should delay the climax to make it more suspenseful, like they do in action films. xD

[facesandmasks]

I wouldn't want to because each time I read other people's smut, I feel demoralised because others can do better than me.

Deep inside, I still feel that there's something that's lacking in my stories. People say there's depth but I still feel something is missing.

[samui_sakura]

i didn't know u wrote smut!
hah~~~~~~~~~

*gets oxygen mask*

^_^

[facesandmasks]

I've got the blue inhaler which I use for my asthma. You need it? ^^

[jaejoongxyuno07]

This was hot!
Can I add you?
:]
I want some more YJ fans. :]