If You Claimed To Love Me... - A Poem

May 01, 2009 22:30

Title: If You Claimed To Love Me... - A Poem
Pairings: Yunjae
Rating: PG
Warnings: Instead of a fanfic, I wrote a poem.
Genre: Angst, Character Assasination
Summary: Jaejoong had enough of what's going on and had planned something. Expressed in Jaejoong's POV.

A/N: I chose not to have this edited as I wanted the poem to be left raw as it is.

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if you claimed to love me, poem, jaeho, angst, yunjae

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kami_no_kami May 3 2009, 19:23:28 UTC
seems more PG than G, my dear Fir.

<3 wow. angsty, yes. free-verse poem i see?

I like it...very dark...that kind of theme rarely gets to me but this poem worked. ^^
i like it~

lol. comments ARE addictive.

hope you ARE OK. :3

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facesandmasks May 4 2009, 12:14:23 UTC
Yes, it's angst and free verse since I prefered the freedom of putting and sentencing my words in the way I want, based on the emotions that had overwhelmed me.

To hear that some who hardly reads such theme of work appreciated what was written is really a thrill to experience.

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tickled41 May 10 2009, 05:21:49 UTC
haha i rather like this
it was.. refreshing~

yunho your a jerk =___=

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facesandmasks May 10 2009, 11:39:43 UTC
Thanks! I do hope to present more works with raw emotions.

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kyrgyzs_tan July 9 2009, 01:08:53 UTC
Love the drama in this. Refreshed my day after a horrible day of cram school. :)

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facesandmasks July 9 2009, 11:58:22 UTC
I didn't know that my angst actually let people feel better. Thanks!

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sujulover4510 August 10 2009, 12:23:43 UTC
U R SO ASWSOME
PERIOD.

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facesandmasks August 10 2009, 15:41:33 UTC
Don't praise me over the roof. I'm not so perfect and I do have my fair share of mistakes too, you know?

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