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2002 by valerie sheridan

Mar 29, 2004 20:10

2002

By: Valerie Sheridan

2002 around 4

It was a cold day

We talked. You told me

of your lacking the want to go on

2002 around 5

You’re away from me

“I love you Valerie”

then I was gone too

away at practice, but I knew.

The dreaded thought plagued my mind

Was this a joke? Where is he?

2002 around 8

I received other news.

Words beginning with,

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Comments 24

Wow kelle_search March 31 2004, 21:48:56 UTC

Omg as i was reading that i started to cry.. it's very beautiful

Re: Wow facestepletdown April 1 2004, 02:57:12 UTC

thanks kelle

Re: Wow jessicawright April 3 2004, 22:42:17 UTC

kelle is def. right, i cried too. that was so touching and beautiful, i dont even know what to say. well your great at writing so keep it up.

-Jess

anonymous April 2 2004, 01:04:22 UTC

i'm glad sean died knowing that he had such a great and beautiful girl to love him. that is the most intense poem i've ever read, and one of the best written.

... lastdyingwords April 4 2004, 14:56:29 UTC

*wipes away a fear tears* valerie you are amazing. i really am speechless.

Re: ... facestepletdown April 8 2004, 20:21:51 UTC

thanks nicole. the part about being on the swings, is when i told you in that note he wrote me he said you had a great smile.

You Rock! oam April 10 2004, 01:17:12 UTC

Hey Val! Just wanted to tell u that poem is really sweet! You do have mad talent!

-Ashley

P.S. You rock @ lacrosse! I'm so proud of you for working so hard!! (Add me to your friends!! :-))

Astonished anonymous April 14 2004, 23:55:17 UTC

that was ... wow i didnt even noe him and i was crying, u do have talent dont let it escape or let anyone tell u that u are no good bc that was .. words cant describe that